Apply Eric Korb's suggestions to Verifiable Claims charter.

VCTF/charter/vcwg-draft.html

@@ -135,7 +135,7 @@ <h2 id="problem">Problem Statement</h2>
     <h2 id="goals">Goals</h2>
 
   <p>
-If successful, the Recommendations from this Working Group will 
+If successful, the Recommendations from this Working Group will
 increase some areas of interoperability between the entities that issue,
 store, and inspect verifiable claims, producing benefits such as:
   </p>
@@ -146,15 +146,15 @@ <h2 id="goals">Goals</h2>
 verifiable claims.
     </li>
     <li>
-Reducing online fraud, such as identity theft, by establishing a standard way
-to cryptographically verify 3rd party claims.
+Improving the detection of fraud, such as false claims and identity theft, by
+establishing a standard way to cryptographically verify 3rd party claims.
     </li>
     <li>
-Reduced operating costs for verifiable claim issuers and inspectors as a 
+Reducing operating costs for verifiable claim issuers and inspectors as a
 result of a common set of technology for expressing and verifying claims.
     </li>
     <li>
-Enhancing some aspects privacy and unlinkability for the subject of a 
+Enhancing some aspects of privacy and unlinkability for the subject of a
 verifiable claim.
     </li>
   </ul>