Reorganize intro and section 4 #266
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| Description[[WOT-THING-DESCRIPTION]] (TD), with Things that exhibit diverse protocols, payload formats and a | ||
| combination of these in platforms and frameworks. | ||
| The mechanism that allows this is called the Binding Mechanism, without which TDs could not build Hypermedia Controls |
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I have added some text but it is a bit difficult to express this in a short/elegant way
Co-authored-by: Cristiano Aguzzi <relu91@users.noreply.github.com>
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I'd say this is a great improvement in the understandability of our binding mechanism. Well done!
Just one minor point, using the verb to form in the following sentence feels weird to me:
This results in different protocols and media types and forms the central challenge for the Web of Things
It might be good to get a native speaker's opinion on this.
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Call of 29.03: No objections, @egekorkan will fix the definition problem and merge |
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fixes #265 , fixes #238
Additionally, it does the following:
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