Some text improvements #48
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@mlagally Please can you share the source of the figures. |
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| The present document defines a WoT Profile that enables out of the box interoperability | ||
| among things and devices. It defines a set of constraints and rules that compliant | ||
| thing descriptions have to adopt to ensure interoperability. | ||
| This document introduce a WoT profile concept that supports the so-called <i>out of the box interoperability</i> |
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This language is less clear than the previous text and waters down the purpose of the core profile.
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I would say this is the same content. However, I changed the word "introduces" to "defines". What do you think?
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| profile in an unambiguous way. This mechanism can be | |||
| used to define additional profiles. | |||
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| <li>In addition it defines a <strong><a>Core | |||
| <li>It define a first base <strong><a>Core | |||
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please clarify what you mean with "a first base"
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What you call as "Core" is the first introduced Profile in the specification, right? So it is the "first base".
However, I have no hard opinion about that. We can change this back if you want.
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I removed the 'base' term in the text
| tests that were conducted as part of the development. It | ||
| is expected that additional profiles for thing templates | ||
| and other protocols will be defined in the near future. | ||
| the HTTP(S) and selected sub-protocols (e.g., for eventing). |
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Not sure we should talk / or select subprotocols. Current proposed event mechanisms include SSE and Longpoll.
These just use HTTP.
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SSE and Longpoll are sub-protocols of HTTP. This is aligned with the current TD spec. Please also see https://www.w3.org/TR/wot-thing-description/#form
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@sebastiankb The sources of the drawio files are embedded in the svg files. |
I only see this here https://github.com/w3c/wot-profile/tree/master/images Where are the drawio files? |
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@sebastiankb agreed to close without merging (Arch call on 15.10) |
based on discussion in #47
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