Merge pull request #1333 from w3c/issue1324-abstract

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   <section id="abstract">
   <p>
-  This document describes a formal model and a common representation 
+  This document describes a formal information model and a common representation 
   for a Web of Things (WoT) Thing Description 1.1. 
   A Thing Description describes the metadata and interfaces of <a>Things</a>,
   where a <a>Thing</a> is an abstraction of a physical or virtual entity that
@@ -375,8 +375,8 @@
   externally when a <a>Thing</a> has resource restrictions (e.g., limited memory space)
   or when a Web of Things-compatible legacy device is retrofitted 
   with a Thing Description.
-  Furthermore, this document introduces the Thing Model, which allows to describe 
-  only the model or class of an IoT entity. Thing Models can be seen as a template for Thing 
+  Furthermore, this document introduces the Thing Model, which allows authors to describe
+  only the model or class of an Internet of Thing (IoT) entity. Thing Models can be seen as a template for Thing 
   Description instances, but with reduced constraints such as no or few requirements for specific 
   communication metadata. 
   </p>

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   <section id="abstract">
   <p>
-  This document describes a formal model and a common representation 
+  This document describes a formal information model and a common representation 
   for a Web of Things (WoT) Thing Description 1.1. 
   A Thing Description describes the metadata and interfaces of <a>Things</a>,
   where a <a>Thing</a> is an abstraction of a physical or virtual entity that
@@ -375,15 +375,15 @@
   externally when a <a>Thing</a> has resource restrictions (e.g., limited memory space)
   or when a Web of Things-compatible legacy device is retrofitted 
   with a Thing Description.
-  Furthermore, this document introduces the Thing Model, which allows to describe 
-  only the model or class of an IoT entity. Thing Models can be seen as a template for Thing 
+  Furthermore, this document introduces the Thing Model, which allows authors to describe
+  only the model or class of an Internet of Thing (IoT) entity. Thing Models can be seen as a template for Thing 
   Description instances, but with reduced constraints such as no or few requirements for specific 
   communication metadata. 
   </p>
 
   <p>
     This specification describes a superset of the features defined in Thing Description 1.0 [[WOT-THING-DESCRIPTION]]. 
-    Unless otherwise specified, documents created with version 1.0 of this specification remain 
+    Unless otherwise specified, documents created with version 1.0 of this specification remain
     compatible with Thing Description 1.1.
   </p>
   </section>