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| This document defines the Web Application Messaging Protocol (WAMP). WAMP is a routed protocol that provides two messaging patterns: Publish & Subscribe and routed Remote Procedure Calls. It is intended to connect application components in distributed applications. WAMP uses WebSocket as its default transport, but can be transmitted via any other protocol that allows for ordered, reliable, bi-directional and message-based communication. | |||
| This document defines the Web Application Messaging Protocol (WAMP). WAMP is a routed protocol that provides two messaging patterns: Publish & Subscribe and routed Remote Procedure Calls. It is intended to connect application components in distributed applications. WAMP uses WebSocket as its default transport, but can be transmitted via any other protocol that allows for ordered, reliable, bi-directional, and message-oriented communications. | |||
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One finds "stream-oriented" and "message-oriented" to be the popular terms in use.
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@ecorm Awesome!! I've looked through all your changes and your detailed comments (thanks for explaining each of your changes!): I think it's exactly this kind of polishing and attention to detail the spec needs. Regarding the prose: I am trying to learn from your changes. But in the end, I guess some of these are subtle and can only be spotted by native speakers. So thanks again! |
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@ecorm - Thanks for the edits! |
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Reviewed and edited for the quality of English prose. I have not attempted to change the meaning of anything.
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