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whatwg · Nov 2, 2021 · ea2a8da · ea2a8da
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@@ -2195,7 +2195,6 @@ a.setAttribute('href', 'https://example.com/'); // change the content attribute
              <dfn data-x="map set" data-x-href="https://infra.spec.whatwg.org/#map-set">setting the value of an entry</dfn>,
              <dfn data-x="map remove" data-x-href="https://infra.spec.whatwg.org/#map-remove">removing an entry</dfn>,
              <dfn data-x="map clear" data-x-href="https://infra.spec.whatwg.org/#map-clear">clear</dfn>,
-             <dfn data-x="map empty" data-x-href="https://infra.spec.whatwg.org/#map-is-empty">empty</dfn>,
              <dfn data-x="map get the keys" data-x-href="https://infra.spec.whatwg.org/#map-getting-the-keys">getting the keys</dfn>,
              <dfn data-x="map get the values" data-x-href="https://infra.spec.whatwg.org/#map-getting-the-values">getting the values</dfn>,
              <dfn data-x="map size" data-x-href="https://infra.spec.whatwg.org/#map-size">size</dfn>, and
@@ -88521,13 +88520,24 @@ new PaymentRequest(&hellip;); // Allowed to use
    then:</p>
 
     <ol>
-     <li><p>Set <var>suspendDuration</var> to the <span>current high resolution time</span> minus
-     <var>newDocument</var>'s <span>suspension time</span>.</p></li>
+     <li>
+      <p>If <var>newDocument</var>'s <span>suspended timer handles</span> is not
+      <span data-x="list empty">empty</span>:</p>
+
+      <ol>
+       <li><p>Assert: <var>newDocument</var>'s <span>suspension time</span> is not zero.</p><li>
+
+       <li><p>Let <var>activeTimers</var> be <var>newDocument</var>'s
+       <span>relevant global object</span>'s <span>map of active timers</span>.</p></li>
 
-     <li><p>For each <var>handle</var> in <var>newDocument</var>'s
-     <span>suspended timer handles</span>, if the <span>map of active timers</span> contains
-     <var>handle</var>, increase <span>map of active timers</span>[handle] by
-     <var>suspendDuration</var>.
+       <li><p>Set <var>suspendDuration</var> to the <span>current high resolution time</span> minus
+       <var>newDocument</var>'s <span>suspension time</span>.</p></li>
+
+       <li><p>For each <var>handle</var> in  <span>suspended timer handles</span>, if
+       <var>activeTimers</var>[<var>handle</var>] <span data-x="map exists">exists</span>, then
+       increase <var>activeTimers</var>[<var>handle</var>] by <var>suspendDuration</var>.</p></li>
+      </ol>
+     </li>
 
      <li><p>Remove any <span data-x="concept-task">tasks</span> queued by the <span>history traversal
      task source</span> that are associated with any <code>Document</code> objects in the
@@ -93812,8 +93822,15 @@ import "https://example.com/foo/../module2.mjs";</code></pre>
         <p>If <var>hasPendingRenders</var> is true, then:</p>
 
         <ol>
-         <li><p>Let <var>nextRenderDeadline</var> be this <span>event loop</span>'s
-         <span>last render opportunity time</span> plus 1000 / 60.</p></li>
+         <li>
+          <p>Let <var>nextRenderDeadline</var> be this <span>event loop</span>'s
+          <span>last render opportunity time</span> plus 1000 divided by the current refersh
+          rate.</p>
+
+          <p>The rerfresh rate can be hardware or implementation specific. For a refresh rate of
+          60Hz, the <var>nextRenderDeadline</var> would be about 16.67ms after the
+          <span>last render opportunity time</span>.</p>
+         </li>
 
          <li><p>If <var>nextRenderDeadline</var> is less than
          <var>deadline</var>, then return <var>nextRenderDeadline</var>.</p></li>
@@ -93825,8 +93842,8 @@ import "https://example.com/foo/../module2.mjs";</code></pre>
      </li>
 
      <li><p>For each <var>win</var> of the <span>same-loop windows</span> for
-     this <span>event loop</span>, <span>start an idle period algorithm</span> for <var>win</var> with
-     <var>computeDeadline</var>. <ref spec=REQUESTIDLECALLBACK></p></li>
+     this <span>event loop</span>, perform the <span>start an idle period algorithm</span> for
+     <var>win</var> with <var>computeDeadline</var>. <ref spec=REQUESTIDLECALLBACK></p></li>
     </ol>
    </li>
 
@@ -96278,7 +96295,7 @@ enum <dfn enum>DOMParserSupportedType</dfn> {
   id="dom-windowtimers-clearInterval">clearInterval(<var>handle</var>)</code></dfn> methods must
   <span data-x="map remove">remove</span> <span>map of active timers</span>[<var>handle</var>] of
   the <code>WindowOrWorkerGlobalScope</code> object on which the method was invoked, if any, where
-  <var>handle</var> is the argument passed to the method.
+  <var>handle</var> is the argument passed to the method.</p>
 
   <p class="note">Because <code data-x="dom-clearTimeout">clearTimeout()</code> and <code
   data-x="dom-clearInterval">clearInterval()</code> clear entries from the same map, either method
@@ -96318,8 +96335,8 @@ enum <dfn enum>DOMParserSupportedType</dfn> {
     following substeps:</p>
 
     <ol>
-     <li><p>If <var>handle</var> does not <span data-x="map exists">exist</span> in the
-     <span>map of active timers</span>, then abort these steps.</p></li>
+     <li><p>If <var>handle</var> does not <span data-x="map exists">exist</span> in
+     <var>method context</var>'s <span>map of active timers</span>, then abort these steps.</p></li>
 
      <li>
       <p>Run the appropriate set of steps from the following list:</p>