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Rewrote sections of man page for clarity #13

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This was originally brought to my attention by a message on the freebsd-questions mailing list. A follow-up comment pointed out some other issues.

Originally, I was just going to fix the "video down" option being
described as making the LCD backlight "less dark" instead of "less
bright," but I decided that all the options could do with somewhat
clearer descriptions.

In addition, REQUIREMENT should be REQUIREMENTS, and the first sentence
of that section could benefit from an initial "the."

Signed-off-by: Daniel Stevenson <daniel@dstev.net>
@yuichiro-naito yuichiro-naito merged commit cdf4067 into yuichiro-naito:master Apr 21, 2021
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I've got the first Pull Request !
Thank you so much.
I had a nice chance to learn English phrases.

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