More fixes for Issue #5

07th-mod · Jun 20, 2017 · b9bb9ca · b9bb9ca
1 parent 894e04e
commit b9bb9ca
Show file tree

Hide file tree

Showing 6 changed files with 13 additions and 13 deletions.
diff --git a/Update/some_005.txt b/Update/some_005.txt
@@ -79,7 +79,7 @@ void main()
 //千紗登rvS04/37/310300359.「なぁ～んか夏美、とってもうれしそうだね？」
 	PlaySE(4, "S04/37/310300359", 256, 64);
 	OutputLine(NULL, "「なぁ～んか夏美、とってもうれしそうだね？」",
-			NULL, "\"So~mething has got Natsumi looking really happy, huh?\"", Line_Normal);
+			NULL, "\"Something has got Natsumi looking really happy, huh?\"", Line_Normal);
 	ClearMessage();
 
 //r千紗登ちゃんが、ツンッと私のほっぺたをつつく。

diff --git a/Update/some_006.txt b/Update/some_006.txt
@@ -1040,7 +1040,7 @@ void main()
 //夏美の母rvS04/00/310600043.「いい加減にしてください…」
 	PlaySE(4, "S04/00/310600043", 256, 64);
 	OutputLine(NULL, "「いい加減にしてください…」",
-			NULL, "\"Please do not bother me...\"", Line_Normal);
+			NULL, "\"Give it a rest...\"", Line_Normal);
 	ClearMessage();
 
 //夏美の祖母rvS04/00/310800056.「…春子…」
@@ -1104,13 +1104,13 @@ void main()
 //夏美の祖母rvS04/00/310800057.「だから…、私は反対したんだよ…。kvS04/00/310800058.…………雛見沢を離れるのは…、kvS04/00/310800059.だから私は、イヤだと言ったんだ」
 	PlaySE(4, "S04/00/310800057", 256, 64);
 	OutputLine(NULL, "「だから…、私は反対したんだよ…。",
-			NULL, "\"So... I don't agree...", Line_WaitForInput);
+			NULL, "\"But... I was opposed...", Line_WaitForInput);
 	PlaySE(4, "S04/00/310800058", 256, 64);
 	OutputLine(NULL, "…………雛見沢を離れるのは…、",
-			NULL, " ............with the decision to leave Hinamizawa...", Line_WaitForInput);
+			NULL, " ...to the decision to leave Hinamizawa...", Line_WaitForInput);
 	PlaySE(4, "S04/00/310800059", 256, 64);
 	OutputLine(NULL, "だから私は、イヤだと言ったんだ」",
-			NULL, " I told you I was opposed.\"", Line_Normal);
+			NULL, " I told you I didn't want to.\"", Line_Normal);
 	ClearMessage();
 
 //夏美の母rvS04/00/310600046.「…また、その話ですか。kvS04/00/310600047.そのことは十分に話し合って、お母さんも納得したでしょう？」

diff --git a/Update/some_008.txt b/Update/some_008.txt
@@ -925,7 +925,7 @@ void main()
 			NULL, "\"No way!", Line_WaitForInput);
 	PlaySE(4, "S04/37/310300455", 256, 64);
 	OutputLine(NULL, "　病院に行く時は私の記憶してる限り、青であったためしがない。",
-			NULL, " As far as I can remember, for all the times I've come to the hospital, this signal has never been blue.", Line_WaitForInput);
+			NULL, " As far as I can remember, for all the times I've come to the hospital, this signal has never been green.", Line_WaitForInput);
 	PlaySE(4, "S04/37/310300456", 256, 64);
 	OutputLine(NULL, "きっと信号機のシステムを作ったやつって、すんごく意地悪なヤツなんだよ！」",
 			NULL, " I'm sure the guy who designed these traffic lights is a sadist!\"", Line_Normal);

diff --git a/Update/some_012.txt b/Update/some_012.txt
@@ -177,7 +177,7 @@ void main()
 //夏美の母rvS04/00/310600098.『————決まってるでしょう…？』
 	PlaySE(4, "S04/00/310600098", 256, 64);
 	OutputLine(NULL, "『————決まってるでしょう…？』",
-			NULL, "\"...It's been decided, hasn't it...?\"", Line_Normal);
+			NULL, "\"...Isn't it obvious...?\"", Line_Normal);
 	ClearMessage();
 
 //rおかーさんは小首を奇妙にかしげながら、私ににたり…、と笑ってみせた。
@@ -1182,7 +1182,7 @@ void main()
 			NULL, " About what I should do.", Line_WaitForInput);
 	PlaySE(4, "S04/00/310700046", 256, 64);
 	OutputLine(NULL, "…元通りに家族揃って幸せに暮らすにはどうしたらいいのか…、ずっと考えていたんだ」",
-			NULL, " ...How we can life happily as a whole family... I've been thinking about it for a long time.\"", Line_Normal);
+			NULL, " ...How we can live happily as a whole family... I've been thinking about it for a long time.\"", Line_Normal);
 	ClearMessage();
 
 //夏美rvS04/36/310101055.「………」
@@ -2456,7 +2456,7 @@ void main()
 //夏美rvS04/36/310101089.「——こないで、藤堂くんッ！」
 	PlaySE(4, "S04/36/310101089", 256, 64);
 	OutputLine(NULL, "「——こないで、藤堂くんッ！」",
-			NULL, "\"...Don't leave, Toudou-kun!\"", Line_Normal);
+			NULL, "\"...Don't come, Toudou-kun!\"", Line_Normal);
 	ClearMessage();
 
 	DrawFilm( 2, 255, 0, 0, 255, 0, 500, TRUE );

diff --git a/Update/some_013.txt b/Update/some_013.txt
@@ -175,7 +175,7 @@ void main()
 
 //r私はベッドから降り、タオルケットを机にかけてシーツを剥ぎ取る。マットレスの上の薄い敷布団には大きな染みがうっすらとできていたので、これも洗ってもらおうと四つ折にたたんでまとめた。
 	OutputLine(NULL, "私はベッドから降り、タオルケットを机にかけてシーツを剥ぎ取る。マットレスの上の薄い敷布団には大きな染みがうっすらとできていたので、これも洗ってもらおうと四つ折にたたんでまとめた。",
-			NULL, "I got off the bed, tossed the blanked to my desk, and yanked the sheet off. There was a huge stain on top of the thin mattress, so I folded it into quarters, intending to wash it too.", Line_Normal);
+			NULL, "I got off the bed, tossed the blanket to my desk, and yanked the sheet off. There was a huge stain on top of the thin mattress, so I folded it into quarters, intending to wash it too.", Line_Normal);
 	ClearMessage();
 
 //夏美rvS04/36/310101119.「でも、今日中に乾くかなぁ…？」
@@ -1069,7 +1069,7 @@ void main()
 
 //r呼吸すら苦しい喉を振り絞っておばーちゃんに呼びかけるが、まるで私の声など耳に届かないかのように、おばーちゃんはその姿勢を崩さずに祈り続けている。
 	OutputLine(NULL, "呼吸すら苦しい喉を振り絞っておばーちゃんに呼びかけるが、まるで私の声など耳に届かないかのように、おばーちゃんはその姿勢を崩さずに祈り続けている。",
-			NULL, "Even though it was difficult to breathe with all the pain in my throat, I called out to Grandma. But as if my voice didn't reach her ears, Grandma continue praying without reacting.", Line_Normal);
+			NULL, "Even though it was difficult to breathe with all the pain in my throat, I called out to Grandma. But as if my voice didn't reach her ears, Grandma continued praying without reacting.", Line_Normal);
 	ClearMessage();
 
 //夏美rvS04/36/310101149.「た、たた、助けて…！kvS04/36/310101150.　おばーちゃん、私を、助けて…ッッ！！」

diff --git a/Update/some_014.txt b/Update/some_014.txt
@@ -269,7 +269,7 @@ void main()
 //暁rvS04/39/310200223.「……俺は、どうすればよかったんだろう…？」
 	PlaySE(4, "S04/39/310200223", 256, 64);
 	OutputLine(NULL, "「……俺は、どうすればよかったんだろう…？」",
-			NULL, "\"......I wonder what I should do...?\"", Line_Normal);
+			NULL, "\"......I wonder what I could've done...?\"", Line_Normal);
 	ClearMessage();
 
 //rふと、今更埒もない問いかけを、…暁は自分自身に投げかける。
@@ -1530,7 +1530,7 @@ void main()
 
 //rそう。——夏美が豹変した瞬間に、暁の心は彼女を見捨てて、…逃げ出していた。
 	OutputLine(NULL, "そう。——夏美が豹変した瞬間に、暁の心は彼女を見捨てて、…逃げ出していた。",
-			NULL, "That's was it. ...Akira's heart abandoned Natsumi the moment she suffered a change... He ran away.", Line_Normal);
+			NULL, "That was it. ...Akira's heart abandoned Natsumi the moment she suffered a change... He ran away.", Line_Normal);
 	ClearMessage();
 
 //r彼が夏美の全てを見たように、夏美もまた、自分の想い人の真実を見てしまったのだ。