Update 20240506.md

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@@ -22,7 +22,7 @@ summary: 這是頂個月日頭 tī 日時消失 ê 影像。
 免一點鐘，日頭就完全去予 [月球閘去][passing the Moon] 矣，干焦賰 ùi 後壁射出來 ê 日光，成做一跤 [璇石手指][diamond ring]。
 食甚 ê 時陣，[規个天頂是暗--ê][surrounding sky went dark]，予踅 tī 日頭外口彼輾 [粉紅仔色日珥][pink prominences] 煞變甲足出眾，[壯觀 ê 日冕][amazing corona] tī 天頂嘛湠到規四界。
 中央 ê [日冕][corona] 是 kā 食甚階段翕 ê 相片疊出來 ê 結果。
-影片煞了後，免幾若分鐘，[就閣出現一擺璇石手指][another diamond ring]，這擺 ê 璇石是 [出現 tī 月球另外一爿][other side of the Moon]。
+免幾若分鐘，影片欲煞進前，[閣出現一擺璇石手指][another diamond ring]，這擺 ê 璇石是 [出現 tī 月球另外一爿][other side of the Moon]。
 紲落來 ê 一點鐘，天頂就 [恢復正常][returned to normal] 矣。
 
 ## [POJ] Ji̍t-choân-si̍t iáⁿ-phìⁿ: Ùi Gîn-pôaⁿ kàu Chhiú-chí
@@ -33,7 +33,7 @@ Chiah kúi-nā hun-cheng, kui-lia̍p ji̍t-thâu to̍h khì hō͘ chiân-kéng 
 Bián chi̍t tiám-cheng, ji̍t-thâu to̍h oân-choân khì hō͘ Goe̍h-kiû cha̍h khì, kan-na chhun ùi āu-piah siā chhut-lâi ê ji̍t-kng, chiâⁿ-chòe chi̍t kha soān-chio̍h chhiú-chí.
 Si̍t-sīm ê sî-chūn, kui-ê thiⁿ-téng sī àm--ê, hō͘ se̍h tī ji̍t-thâu gōa-kháu hit liàn hún-âng-á-sek ji̍t-ní soah piàn-kah chiok chhut-chiòng, chòng-koan ê ji̍t-bián tī thiⁿ-téng mā thòaⁿ kàu kui-sì-kè.
 Tiong-ng ê ji̍t-bián sī kā ji̍t-sīm kai-tōaⁿ hip--ê siòng-phìⁿ tha̍h chhut-lâi ê kiat-kó.
-Iáⁿ-phìⁿ soah liáu-āu, bián kúi-nā hun-cheng, to̍h koh chhut-hiān chi̍t-pái soān-chio̍h chhiú-chí, chit pái ê soān-chio̍h sī chhut-hiān tī Goe̍h-kiû lēng-gōa chi̍t-pêng.
+Bián kúi-nā hun-cheng, iáⁿ-phìⁿ beh soah chìn-chêng, to̍h koh chhut-hiān chi̍t-pái soān-chio̍h chhiú-chí, chit pái ê soān-chio̍h sī chhut-hiān tī Goe̍h-kiû lēng-gōa chi̍t-pêng.
 Sòa--lo̍h-lâi ê chi̍t tiám-cheng, thiⁿ-téng to̍h khoe-ho̍k chèng-siông--ah.
 
 ## [KIP] Ji̍t-tsuân-si̍t iánn-phìnn: Uì Gîn-puânn kàu Tshiú-tsí
@@ -44,7 +44,7 @@ Tsiah kuí-nā hun-tsing, kui-lia̍p ji̍t-thâu to̍h khì hōo tsiân-kíng ê
 Bián tsi̍t tiám-tsing, ji̍t-thâu to̍h uân-tsuân khì hōo Gue̍h-kiû tsa̍h khì, kan-na tshun uì āu-piah siā tshut-lâi ê ji̍t-kng, tsiânn-chuè tsi̍t kha suān-tsio̍h tshiú-tsí.
 Si̍t-sīm ê sî-tsūn, kui-ê thinn-tíng sī àm--ê, hōo se̍h tī ji̍t-thâu guā-kháu hit liàn hún-âng-á-sik ji̍t-ní suah piàn-kah tsiok tshut-tsìong, tsòng-kuan ê ji̍t-bián tī thinn-tíng mā thuànn kàu kui-sì-kè.
 Tiong-ng ê ji̍t-bián sī kā ji̍t-sīm kai-tuānn hip--ê siòng-phìnn tha̍h tshut-lâi ê kiat-kó.
-Iánn-phìnn suah liáu-āu, bián kuí-nā hun-tsing, to̍h koh tshut-hiān tsi̍t-pái suān-tsio̍h tshiú-tsí, tsit pái ê suān-tsio̍h sī tshut-hiān tī Gue̍h-kiû līng-guā tsi̍t-pîng.
+Bián kuí-nā hun-tsing, iánn-phìnn beh suah tsìn-tsîng,  to̍h koh tshut-hiān tsi̍t-pái suān-tsio̍h tshiú-tsí, tsit pái ê suān-tsio̍h sī tshut-hiān tī Gue̍h-kiû līng-guā tsi̍t-pîng.
 Suà--lo̍h-lâi ê tsi̍t tiám-tsing, thinn-tíng to̍h khue-ho̍k tsìng-siông--ah.
 
 ## [English] A Total Solar Eclipse from Sliver to Ring