Updates Scan page wording for states

[ChaosExAnima]

Changes proposed in this Pull Request

• Adds better text for the provisioning state.
• Removes unavailable state as the ScanUpsell component covers it.

Testing instructions

• On a site with Scan, alter the scan state to be provisioning.

Screenshot

Fixes 1151678672052943-as-1175196271951194.

[matticbot]

Test live: https://calypso.live/?branch=update/scan-wording

[matticbot]

Here is how your PR affects size of JS and CSS bundles shipped to the user's browser:

Sections (~73 bytes removed 📉 [gzipped])

name  parsed_size           gzip_size
scan       -527 B  (-0.2%)      -73 B  (-0.1%)

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[enejb]

This looks good to me. Lets ship it!

[michelleweber]

I don't understand what this copy is trying to communicate, and I think it creates more questions than it resolves at the moment. Let's change that! Questions to try and clarify:

• Does "we're taking a first look" mean "we're starting the first scan," or something else?

• Does "the results will be with you soon" mean "the results of whatever this first look is doing will be ready soon" or "the first scan will be done soon"?

• What are these results? Where will these results be available? On this page? Will I get an email?

[ChaosExAnima]

@michelleweber - Thank you for those great questions!

Does "we're taking a first look" mean "we're starting the first scan," or something else?

It means Jetpack Scan is getting ready to take the first scan of a site.

Does "the results will be with you soon" mean "the results of whatever this first look is doing will be ready soon" or "the first scan will be done soon"?

It means that the setup finishes soon, and then the site will be scanned. If there is an issue, we will email you. @enejb, do you know if the first successful scan triggers an email as well?

What are these results? Where will these results be available? On this page? Will I get an email?

If there's a threat (hack, security issue, etc.), it will update here as well as send you an email. If there's no threat, it will show here. Regardless, no user action needs to happen.

[enejb]

It means that the setup finishes soon, and then the site will be scanned. If there is an issue, we will email you. @enejb, do you know if the first successful scan triggers an email as well?

It should but we are not there yet.

[michelleweber]

Super helpful, thanks. I'm thinking something like:

Preparing to scan
Welcome to Jetpack Scan! We're scoping out your site, getting set up to take the first full scan. We'll let you know if we spot any security issues, and then your first scan will start.

[ChaosExAnima]

@michelleweber - Can I propose something like:

Welcome to Jetpack Scan! We're scoping out your site, getting set up to take the first scan. We'll let you know if we spot any security issues!

We let users know if there are security issues after the first scan, not before.

[michelleweber]

It means that the setup finishes soon, and then the site will be scanned. If there is an issue, we will email you.

What kind of issues would we see at this point?

And now that I'm asking -- does the actual scan start automatically when this pre-scan is done? That'd be nice to add.

[ChaosExAnima]

What kind of issues would we see at this point?

We'd see issues as in security threats such as vulnerable plugins or suspicious code. We'd also notify if the system couldn't set things up like the site is down.

And now that I'm asking -- does the actual scan start automatically when this pre-scan is done? That'd be nice to add.

Yes, we'd do an initial scan automatically.

[michelleweber]

Thoughts?:

Preparing to scan

Welcome to Jetpack Scan! We're scoping out your site, setting up to do a full scan. We'll let you know if we spot any issues that might impact a scan, then start your first full scan will start.

[ChaosExAnima]

Alrighty! I've updated the wording and can now merge once tests pass. Thanks all!

[a8ci18n]

This Pull Request is now available for translation here: https://translate.wordpress.com/deliverables/3626605

Thank you @ChaosExAnima for including a screenshot in the description! This is really helpful for our translators.

[a8ci18n]

Translation for this Pull Request has now been finished.