Cleanup of README file

README.md

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 F3Swirly
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-Welcome!
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-This demo contains the "swirly" control for iOS.   It has been
-tested on iOS 4.x and 5.x on iTouch, iPhone, and iPad devices.
-
-![Screenshot](https://raw.github.com/ChiefPilot/F3Swirly/master/F3Swirly.png "Screenshot of Component Demo App")
-
-If you find this control of use (or find bugs), I'd love to hear
-from you!   Drop a note to brad@flightiii.com with questions, comments, 
-or dissenting opinions.
-
-
 Background
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 I needed a control which had visual aspects of both an  activity 
-indicator as well as an annunciator.    This control satisfies that
-need by providing, textual, color, and animated feedback.  
+indicator as well as an annunciator.   Not finding one, I decided to
+build one to statisfy that need by providing textual, color, and 
+animated feedback to the user.
 
 The control uses Quartz 2D and Core Animation to provide a reasonable
 level of performance with virtually no CPU overhead required for the 
 animation.    The number of segments, segment color, segment thickness, 
 rotation rate, and text can all be customized.   
 
+![Screenshot](https://raw.github.com/ChiefPilot/F3Swirly/master/F3Swirly.png "Screenshot of Component Demo App")
+
+If you find this control of use (or find bugs), I'd love to hear
+from you!   Drop a note to brad@flightiii.com with questions, comments, 
+or dissenting opinions.
+
 
 Usage
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