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diff --git a/_posts/2016-02-23-Paticle_Detector_R&D.markdown b/_posts/2016-02-23-Paticle_Detector_R&D.markdown
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-title: "Statistical Analysis for particle detector RnD."
+title: "Statistical analysis for particle detector RnD."
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 date: 2013-01-23
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diff --git a/_posts/2016-05-20-Data-driven-modeling-selection.markdown b/_posts/2016-05-20-Data-driven-modeling-selection.markdown
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-title: "Data Driven Modeling in Dark Matter Search."
+title: "Data-driven modeling in Dark Matter search."
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diff --git a/_posts/2016-07-08-find-the-best-departure-time.markdown b/_posts/2016-07-08-find-the-best-departure-time.markdown
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-title: "Findbesttime: App to beat the rush hour traffic!"
+title: "Findbesttime - An app to beat the rush hour traffic!"
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 date: 2015-12-30
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diff --git a/_posts/2019-10-04-ieee-cis-fraud-prediction.md b/_posts/2019-10-04-ieee-cis-fraud-prediction.md
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-title: "Predicting eCommerce Fraud - IEEE CIS VESTA"
+title: "Predicting eCommerce fraud - IEEE CIS VESTA"
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diff --git a/about.md b/about.md
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-<h2> About </h2>
+<h2> About Me</h2>
 
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-Hi!! I am a Data Scientist based in Vancouver, BC. I have an expertise in Applied Statistics, Machine Learning, Signal Processing, Software Development and Web-Analytics. Given my strong technical background and Business Analytics experience, I am able to work on a variety of problems across industry domains to come up with data-driven solutions to improve customer experiences and to increase operational efficiency and profitability.
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+Hi!! I am a Data Scientist based in Vancouver, BC. I have an expertise in Applied Statistics, Machine Learning, Signal Processing, Software Development and Web-Analytics. Given my strong technical background and Business Analytics experience, I am able to work on a variety of problems across industry domains to come up with data-driven solutions to improve customer experiences and to increase operational efficiency and profitability. -->
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+Hi!! I love numbers (real and imaginary). I make a living by giving your data a purpose. I have an expertise in Applied Statistics, Machine Learning, Signal Processing, Software Development and Web-Analytics. Given my strong technical background and Business Analytics experience, I am able to, and enjoy working on a variety of problems across industry domains to come up with elegant data-driven solutions. 
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-I enjoy uncovering hidden insights from data and learning new techniques in statistics, machine learning and software development. I also enjoy working on independent projects that interest me, playing soccer and parenting :). I am a free and open source software enthusiast and love tinkering with electronics and computers (sometimes ill-advisedly!). 
+When I'm not doing that, I love learning new techniques in statistics, machine learning, analytics and software development. I also enjoy working on independent projects that interest me, playing soccer and parenting :). I am a free and open source software enthusiast and love tinkering with electronics and computers (sometimes ill-advisedly!). 
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 I'm involved in the community by doing workshops on data analysis and software tools for researchers and students through <a href="http://software-carpentry.org/">SoftwareCarpentry</a>. I also sometimes volunteer at <a href="https://www.freegeekvancouver.org">Free Geek</a> to reduce the impact of e-waste by repurposing used pc hardware. 
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