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Signed-off-by: David Silver <dms.silver@gmail.com>

Flexible Society Main File/story.ni

@@ -30,7 +30,7 @@ Book - Help
 
 Table of Basic Help Options (continued)
 title	description 
-"Contacting the author"	"If you have any difficulties with [story title], please contact me at: http://blog.flexiblesurvival.com/" 
+"Contacting the author"	"If you have any difficulties with [story title], please contact me at: http://nukuv.blogspot.com/" 
 "Food"	"Most tribes need food to survive. Be sure to assign some workers to hunting or farming as appropriate."
 "Turns"	"As leader of the tribe, you and you alone decide when time advances. Type turn to make this happen."
 
@@ -151,7 +151,7 @@ Table of Fancy Status
 left	central	right
 "Location: [the player's surroundings]"	"Morale: [morale of tribe of player]/100"	"Tribe:[tribe of player]"
 "Exits: [List of Valid Directions]"	"Food: [food of tribe of player] Water: [water of tribe of player]"	"Score:[score]/[maximum score]"
-"Population: [population of tribe of player]"	"Freecred: [creds of tribe of player]"	"Science: [science of tribe of player]"
+"Population: [population of tribe of player]"	"Freecreds: [creds of tribe of player]"	"Science: [science of tribe of player]"
 "[if menu depth > 0]N = Next[otherwise]Research[end if]"	"[if menu depth > 0]ENTER = Select[otherwise][current of nerd] Lvl [level of current of nerd plus one][end if]"	"[if menu depth > 0]P = Previous[otherwise][progress of current of nerd]/[cost of current of nerd][end if]"
 
 
@@ -160,7 +160,7 @@ Book 4 - Tribes
 The Snozzlefoggles is a species.
 
 Blue Gryphons is a species.
-The description of it is "Hir body is covered in soft fur. Hir head is avian, with a powerful beak that protrudes in a clean curve. Above, feline ears twitch and turn above hir altered face. Hir body is adorned with two large feathery wings that flutter softly. Milk also seems to flow at a soft rate from hir nipples. Sie has 2 plump D cup sized breasts. Hir arms are well muscled and vaguely avian, sporting dangerous claws at the end of each digit. Hir legs are dramatically altered, with powerful digitigrade legs of leonine musculature, great claws on hir softly furred feet-paws. Sie has a thin leonine tail swaying over hir ass. Its soft, blue, and furry length has a tuft of blue fur at the end. Sie has a single, black, knotted member that averages around a foot long, and a female portal that can easily accept it.".
+The description of it is "Their body is covered in soft fur. Hir head is avian, with powerful beak that protrudes in a clean curve. Above, feline ears twitch and turn above hir altered face. Hir body is adorned with two large feathery wings that flutter softly. Milk also seems to flow at a soft rate from hir nipples. Sie has 2 plump D cup sized breasts. Hir arms are well muscled and vaguely avian, sporting dangerous claws at the end each digit. Hir legs are dramatically altered, with powerful digitigrade legs of leonine musculature, great claws on hir softly furred feet-paws. Sie has a thin leonine tail swaying over hir ass. Its soft, blue, and furry length has a tuft of blue fur at the end. Sie has a single, black, knotted member that averages around a foot long, and a female portal that can easily accept it.".
 The skin of it is "soft blue fur".
 The skinadj of it is "blue furred".
 The body of it is "fertile hermaphrodite blend of panther and bird".
@@ -432,7 +432,7 @@ to species menu:
 	species menu;
 
 When play begins(this is the play start rule):
-	say "Welcome to Flexible Society. You are a member of a species, probably quite new, trying to secure a niche in the world rocked by the Promethean Virus, a nanite plague that has reduced mankind to largescale rubble and given rise to hundreds of new species. Your first decision will be what species you are and will lead. Some species are better at some things than others.";
+	say "Welcome to Flexible Society. You are a member of a species, probably quite new, trying to secure a niche in the world rocked by the Promethean Virus, a nanite plauge that has reduced mankind to largescale rubble and given rise to hundreds of new species. Your first decision will be what species you are and will lead. Some species are better some some things than others.";
 	wait for any key;
 	Species Menu;
 	study tribe of player;
@@ -495,7 +495,7 @@ Check Maxtasking:
 	if clipboard is not visible:
 		say "You need your trusty clipboard to assign jobs." instead;
 	if noun is not valid:
-		say "Your people do not know how to do that job." instead;
+		say "Your people do not know how to do that job" instead;
 	follow maximum of noun;
 	if max of noun is population of tribe of player:
 		say "That job appears to have no real maximum.";
@@ -692,7 +692,7 @@ An everyturn rule(This is the Shit Happens rule):
 	try resolving sit;
 	continue the action;
 
-Include Random Situations by Maw.
+Include  Random Situations by Maw.
 Include Events Basic by Sarokcat.
 
 Part - Resolving Action
@@ -713,7 +713,6 @@ This is the lost territory rule:
 	rule fails;
 
 Instead of resolving the lost territory:
-	say "You get the sudden good news. Some land that was thought to be infested with hostile mutants has been reported as abandoned by your scouts. Your people claim it eagerly.";
+	say "You get the sudden good news. Some land that was though to be infested with hostile mutants has been reported as abandoned by your scouts. Your people claim it eagerly.";
 	increase the territory of tribe of player by a random number from 2 to 6;
-	now lost territory is resolved;
-
+	now lost territory is resolved;