Fix: Clarify the wording of the release issue template (#10520)

* Clarify the wording of the release issue template

* Update release.md

.github/issue-templates/release.md

@@ -1,16 +1,16 @@
 # Release {version}
 We are releasing a new version, this issue will keep track of the progress between the first release candidate (20th of each month) to the final release (27th of each month).
 
-After the 20th of each month we start the release process that ends 7 days after, during that period we enter a Feature Freeze. While in the Feature Freeze, we will only be merging bug fixes and not new features.
+Beginning on the 20th of each month, we will start the release process which ends 7 days later (the 27th). During this period of time, we will enter a "Feature Freeze". This Feature Freeze means that we will only be merging pull requests which fix bugs and not ones which add new features.
 
-For any regression, open a new issue and link to this one.
+When you find a bug that is a regression, please open a new issue and link it to this one.
 
 
 ## Before Release - Preparation - 1 business day before the day 20th
 - [x] Create the issue to track the release progress
-- [ ] Define the highlights from release PRs as suggestion to be included on Blog Post
-- [ ] Talk to the Marketing Team about the Blog Post release
-- [ ] Talk to the Documentation Team about the Docs release
+- [ ] Define the highlights from release PRs as suggestion to be included on Blog Post <!-- link to the website's issue -->
+- [ ] Talk to the Marketing Team about starting the release Blog Post
+- [ ] Talk to the Documentation Team about ensuring the Docs are up to date and all pull requests are merged
 - [ ] Sync translations from [LingoHub](https://translate.lingohub.com/rocketchat/rocket-dot-chat/dashboard)
 
 ## Release Candidate 1 - On the 20th
@@ -19,17 +19,17 @@ For any regression, open a new issue and link to this one.
 - [ ] On branch `release-candidate` run `npm run release` and follow the steps
 - [ ] Publish the branch and the generated tag
 - [ ] Edit the tag on GitHub and paste the generated History removing the version from the first line and mark the checkbox **This is a pre-release**
-- [ ] Ensure the build is passing on CircleCI
-- [ ] Ensure the build is passing on Docker Hub
+- [ ] Ensure the build is passing on [CircleCI](https://circleci.com/gh/RocketChat/Rocket.Chat)
+- [ ] Ensure the build is passing on [Docker Hub](https://hub.docker.com/r/rocketchat/rocket.chat/builds/)
 
 <!-- Copy following block for next release candidates
 ## Release Candidate {release-candidate-version}
 - [ ] Merge `develop` into `release-candidate` branch
 - [ ] On branch `release-candidate` run `npm run release` and follow the steps
 - [ ] Publish the branch and the generated tag
 - [ ] Edit the tag on GitHub and paste the generated History removing the version from the first line and mark the checkbox **This is a pre-release**
-- [ ] Ensure the build is passing on CircleCI
-- [ ] Ensure the build is passing on Docker Hub
+- [ ] Ensure the build is passing on [CircleCI](https://circleci.com/gh/RocketChat/Rocket.Chat)
+- [ ] Ensure the build is passing on [Docker Hub](https://hub.docker.com/r/rocketchat/rocket.chat/builds/)
 -->
 
 ## Final Release - On the 27th
@@ -44,16 +44,18 @@ For any regression, open a new issue and link to this one.
   - [ ] Paste the history removing the version from the first line
   - [ ] Save as **draft**
 - [ ] Create a PR from the branch `release-{version}` with the same history from the tag/release
-- [ ] Ensure the build is passing on CircleCI
-- [ ] Ensure the build is passing on Docker Hub
+- [ ] Ensure the build is passing on [CircleCI](https://circleci.com/gh/RocketChat/Rocket.Chat)
+- [ ] Ensure the build is passing on [Docker Hub](https://hub.docker.com/r/rocketchat/rocket.chat/builds/)
 - [ ] When build is passing ask for approval
 - [ ] When approved merge it!
 - [ ] When merged edit the release/tag and publish it
 
 ## After Release - Conclusion - 1 business day after the 27th
-- [ ] Check if related issues was closed
-- [ ] Check if related issues was assigned to the correct milestone
-- [ ] Check with the Marketing Team about the Blog Post release
+- [ ] Ensure all of the related issues were closed
+- [ ] Determine if all of the related issues were correctly assigned to the this version's milestone
+- [ ] Get an update from Marketing Team about the release Blog Post
 - [ ] Check with the Documentation Team about the Docs release
-- [ ] Create a Sync PR to merge back master to develop
+- [ ] Create a Sync PR to merge `master` back into `develop`
+- [ ] Ensure the build is passing on [CircleCI](https://circleci.com/gh/RocketChat/Rocket.Chat)
+- [ ] When build has passed, ask for approval and wait
 - [ ] Merge Sync PR