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[paper] Expand first paragraph #12

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lrnv opened this issue Oct 30, 2023 · 2 comments
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[paper] Expand first paragraph #12

lrnv opened this issue Oct 30, 2023 · 2 comments

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@lrnv
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lrnv commented Oct 30, 2023

The first paragraph of the statement of needs is very well written and precise in its wording. However, it is a bit short for persons that are not accointed to the field to understand what is happening.

Between the two sentences, you might add a third one starting by "For exemple, ..." to give an exemple of a interesting sensitivity and why it is so.

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ahudde commented Feb 15, 2024

Dear, @lrnv, what do you think of this explanation?

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lrnv commented Feb 15, 2024

Perfect !

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