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Editorial: improve readability, harmonize terms #8

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siethower merged 3 commits into anima-wg:main from mkovatsc:patch-1

Feb 21, 2023

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mkovatsc commented Feb 14, 2023

I made an editorial pass over the document with the following changes:

harmonize information given in introduction (voucher serializations and media type)
replace "MIME type" with "media type"
align term to describe format with RFC 7515 terms
fixed incomplete sentence(s)
changed to section linking in references
clarified format figures (inconsistent use of curly brackets made usage unclear to me -- took Section 9 examples as ground truth to include brackets)

mkovatsc added 3 commits

February 14, 2023 14:11


          editorial: improve readability, harmonize terms

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          editorial: only one media type registered

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          editorial: fix typo

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siethower merged commit d5e831a into anima-wg:main

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