Merge pull request #13643 from mtruj013/cloud-copy-update

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templates/cloud/index.html

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-        <h1>Private cloud vs hybrid cloud, multicloud and more</h1>
+      <h1>Private cloud vs hybrid cloud, multicloud and more</h1>
       <p class="p-heading--4">Choose the cloud architecture that suits you best</p>
       <p>There is no one size fits all cloud architecture. Developing the optimum cloud strategy requires evaluating your business needs and aligning them with the different solutions available.</p>
-      <p>Canonical fully supports public clouds and provides its own solutions for <a href="/openstack/consulting">private cloud implementation</a> and <a href="/openstack/managed">management</a>, as well as workload orchestration in hybrid cloud and multicloud environments.</p>
+      <p>Canonical fully supports public clouds and provides its own <a href="https://canonical.com/solutions/infrastructure">infrastructure solutions</a> for <a href="/openstack/consulting">private cloud implementation</a> and <a href="/openstack/managed">management</a>, as well as workload orchestration in hybrid cloud and multicloud environments.</p>
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         <a class="p-button--positive" href="/engage/cloud-cost-optimisation-best-practices">Optimise your cloud infrastructure</a>
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       <p><b>Advantages:</b></p>
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-        <li class="p-list__item is-ticked">Compared to public clouds, private clouds are often <a href="https://go.451research.com/Emerging-pricing-model-for-private-cloud">more cost-effective</a>&mdash;especially when used at scale and in the long-term.</li>
+        <li class="p-list__item is-ticked">If run efficiently and well-utilised, private clouds are often <a href="https://go.451research.com/Emerging-pricing-model-for-private-cloud">more cost-effective</a> for equivalent resources than public clouds.</li>
         <li class="p-list__item is-ticked">An organisation with a private cloud does not share its hosting resources with other organisations meaning in general, private clouds provide better performance.</li>
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       <p><b>Disadvantages:</b></p>
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+        <li class="p-list__item is-crossed">Purchasing and provisioning new hardware carries relatively high fixed costs, which are wasted if the cloud has low utilisation.</li>
         <li class="p-list__item is-crossed">The deployment and on-going management of a private cloud requires dedicated team resources and technical skill.</li>
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@@ -101,20 +102,21 @@ <h2>What is a public cloud?</h2>
       <p><b>Advantages:</b></p>
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         <li class="p-list__item is-ticked">Immediate access to infrastructure as a service (IaaS) can significantly accelerate time to market for organisations.</li>
-        <li class="p-list__item is-ticked">Public clouds provide the ability to scale resource consumption virtually without limits.</li>
+        <li class="p-list__item is-ticked">Public clouds provide the ability to scale resource consumption as needed and virtually without limits.</li>
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       <p><b>Disadvantages:</b></p>
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-        <li class="p-list__item is-crossed">While the headline costs of the public cloud look attractive, hidden ancillary costs often make it an expensive choice of cloud architecture.</li>
+        <li class="p-list__item is-crossed"><a href="https://go.451research.com/Emerging-pricing-model-for-private-cloud">Can be more expensive</a> than an efficiently-managed and well-utilised private cloud.</li>
+        <li class="p-list__item is-crossed">In addition to the compute costs, there can be unexpected ancillary costs like egress (taking your data out of the cloud)</li>
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-    <p>Major public cloud providers include Amazon Web Services (AWS), Microsoft Azure, Google Cloud Platform, Oracle and IBM Cloud.</p>
+    <p>Major public cloud providers include <a href="/aws">Amazon Web Services (AWS)</a>, <a href="/azure">Microsoft Azure</a>, <a href="/gcp">Google Cloud Platform</a>, Oracle and IBM Cloud.</p>
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-      <a href="/engage/public-cloud-openstack-implementation">Learn how to build your own public cloud&nbsp;&rsaquo;</a>
+      <a href="/download/cloud">Learn more about Ubuntu on Public Clouds&nbsp;&rsaquo;</a>
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