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| For details on configuring monitors, see the `Monitor Config Reference`_. | ||
| A Ceph Client must contact a Ceph Monitor and obtain a current copy of the | ||
| cluster map in order to be permitted to read data from or to write data to the |
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Good eye. Accepted.
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| It is possible for a Ceph cluster to function properly with only a single | ||
| monitor in it, but a Ceph cluster that has only a single monitor in it has a |
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Good eye here, too. Accepted.
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| single point of failure: if the monitor goes down, Ceph clients will be unable | ||
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| Ceph supports a cluster of monitors in order to increase reliability and fault |
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s/supports/leverages/
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This is that rarest of cases: the time when I think that "leveraged" is, in fact, the right word.
Accepted.
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Ever since I read that "utilize" doesn't mean what I think it means I've shied away from it.
Improve the sentence structure in the "High Availability Monitors" section of doc/architecture.rst. Co-authored-by: Anthony D'Atri <anthony.datri@gmail.com> Signed-off-by: Zac Dover <zac.dover@proton.me>
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Improve the sentence structure in the "High Availability Monitors" section of doc/architecture.rst.
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