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docs: update OpenShift getting started guide #16006

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  • Correct some minor errors in scripts.
  • Update openshift-install output for latest stable version.
  • Add instructions on how to delete the cluster.
  • Minor grammatical tweaks.
  • Minor formatting tweaks.

Signed-off-by: Tom Payne tom@isovalent.com

@twpayne twpayne added area/documentation Impacts the documentation, including textual changes, sphinx, or other doc generation code. release-note/misc This PR makes changes that have no direct user impact. labels May 4, 2021
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Would be nice to have the new command blocks in proper .. code-block:: shell-session blocks rather than bash.

Looks all good to me otherwise, thanks for the fixes!

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twpayne commented May 4, 2021

Thanks, PR updated. I've updated all code blocks to use .. code-block:: shell-session.

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Looks good to me, thanks!


.. note::
ls "${CLUSTER_NAME}/manifests/cluster-network-*-cilium-*"
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double quotes turn * into a literal character, so the glob won't expand...

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I don't think they do, single-quotes do that

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I think Ilya is right, try ls "*".

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🤯 I could've have sworn that bash would expand the glob...sorry folks 😅

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Looks good overall!

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[Simply marking that changes are required, to address Ilya's remark.]

* Correct some minor errors in scripts.
* Update openshift-install output for latest stable version.
* Add instructions on how to delete the cluster.
* Minor grammatical tweaks.
* Minor formatting tweaks.

Signed-off-by: Tom Payne <tom@isovalent.com>
@qmonnet qmonnet added the ready-to-merge This PR has passed all tests and received consensus from code owners to merge. label May 10, 2021
@ti-mo ti-mo merged commit 421314d into master May 10, 2021
@ti-mo ti-mo deleted the pr/twpayne/openshift-gsg branch May 10, 2021 13:56
@maintainer-s-little-helper maintainer-s-little-helper bot moved this from Needs backport from master to Backport pending to v1.10 in 1.10.0-rc2 May 12, 2021
@maintainer-s-little-helper maintainer-s-little-helper bot moved this from Backport pending to v1.10 to Backport done to v1.10 in 1.10.0-rc2 May 13, 2021
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