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     <h1>Recently Active Users</h1>
     <nav style="font-size: 80%"><a href="https://tools.wmflabs.org/apersonbot/">Tools</a> &gt; <b>Recently Active Users</b></nav>
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-      This tool searches for experienced editors that have recently edited.* It's an attempt at a replacement for <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:HAU">WP:HAU</a>. Please note that many of these editors may be quite busy; try to only contact those editors that seem to be replying to people on their talk pages.
+      This tool searches for experienced editors who have recently edited.* Recent activity does not imply that these editors are available to assist immediately, so first view their recent contributions to determine whether you would be interrupting. In case your contact is not available, we recommend filing administrative requests through the normal noticeboards rather than contacting admins directly.
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-      *<span style="font-size: 90%">"Experienced" means 10,000 edits or more; "recently" means that an editor appears on <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Special:RecentChanges">Special:RecentChanges</a> - i.e. they edited less than 5-10 minutes ago.</span>
+      *<span style="font-size: 90%">In specific, this tool searches editors who have edited <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Special:RecentChanges">in the last ten minutes</a> and have made over 10,000 edits in total. This tool replaces <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Highly_Active_Users">Wikipedia:Highly Active Users</a>.</span>
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