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1- the order of the TCAS should be after the lights not before in the guide 2- You forgot to mention the Below the line Before takeoff checklist before starting the roll and to start the chrono 3- it's not -10* but but half forward sidestick 4- VS speed doesn't mean S peed but it means stall speed
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* Started page takeoff-climb-cruise.md * Updated overview page with correct reference * Added basic a320 knowledge section * Lineup, Take off, Initial climb sections drafts with images * Added section Climb Many corrections in text Optimized images (sharpness, contrast) * Corrections after a proof read * Corrections after a proof read * Cosmetic changes. Initial draft version complete * Extended Cruise section and small corrections * Extended Cruise section and small corrections * Changes reflecting pilot's feedback: 1- the order of the TCAS should be after the lights not before in the guide 2- You forgot to mention the Below the line Before takeoff checklist before starting the roll and to start the chrono 3- it's not -10* but but half forward sidestick 4- VS speed doesn't mean S peed but it means stall speed * Changed order for before take off checks "below the line" * Incorporated the second pilot feedback. * Changed T.O to T.O. * removed manual line breaks at right margin in source (relying on editor's soft wrap) * Added bullet points for "line up" "cleared for take off" * Changed flaps paragraph as per review suggestions * Added divider before 4. Climb * Used tabs to get images in one compact line * Changed Sidestick to sidestick * Changed rotation paragraph * Update docs/beginner-guide/takeoff-climb-cruise.md Typo of -> off Co-authored-by: Val <reyes.nico@gmail.com> * Update docs/beginner-guide/takeoff-climb-cruise.md checkins -> check-ins Co-authored-by: Val <reyes.nico@gmail.com> * Indentation of some "!!! info" blocks changed * Grammar: allows -> allow * Fixed "takeoff" vs. "take off" and "lineup" vs. "line up" according to grammar rule (one word when noun or adjective, two words when verb) Co-authored-by: Val <reyes.nico@gmail.com>
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* docs: add beginner-docs-readme.md * docs: add beginner guide overview.md * config: reference beginner guide overview.md in mkdocs.yml * docs: mention target branch in beginner-docs-readme.md * docs(beginner-guide): Preparing the MCDU (#58) * Add preparing-mcdu.md + add relevant nav menu item * initial sections and formatting added * init A copy * DATA copy * section dividers * flight plan finished flight plan cont. flight plan SID * change scroll keys to slew * add ofp to assets and guide * section 2 copy added section 2 copy added * INIT B copy * change line select key references to new format * restructure directory * add MCDU guide assets * utilize assets in guide * add simbrief section and images * typos + additional information * add page link to overview.md * typo line 315 * capitalize simbrief for titles only * change simbrief section titles and details * added fuel and payload warning * added next document link for continuity * typo line 311 * add suggestions in PR review + discord * docs(beginner-guide): after landing (#54) * Add on the ground.md and updated mkdocs.yml * re organize in a tabbed format * Rename page and improve tabed layout * Add pictures and fix spelling * Add pictures * Add clarity fixes and verifyed by dan da man * Add val changes docs/beginner-guide/after-landing-steps.md Co-authored-by: Val <reyes.nico@gmail.com> * remove extra comm panel * placeholder `#` for powering down * H3 change * fix alignment [comm panel] image * typos + additional information overhead panel * corrections to 2nd section Co-authored-by: Val <reyes.nico@gmail.com> * docs(beginner-guide): takeoff-climb-cruise page (#90) * Started page takeoff-climb-cruise.md * Updated overview page with correct reference * Added basic a320 knowledge section * Lineup, Take off, Initial climb sections drafts with images * Added section Climb Many corrections in text Optimized images (sharpness, contrast) * Corrections after a proof read * Corrections after a proof read * Cosmetic changes. Initial draft version complete * Extended Cruise section and small corrections * Extended Cruise section and small corrections * Changes reflecting pilot's feedback: 1- the order of the TCAS should be after the lights not before in the guide 2- You forgot to mention the Below the line Before takeoff checklist before starting the roll and to start the chrono 3- it's not -10* but but half forward sidestick 4- VS speed doesn't mean S peed but it means stall speed * Changed order for before take off checks "below the line" * Incorporated the second pilot feedback. * Changed T.O to T.O. * removed manual line breaks at right margin in source (relying on editor's soft wrap) * Added bullet points for "line up" "cleared for take off" * Changed flaps paragraph as per review suggestions * Added divider before 4. Climb * Used tabs to get images in one compact line * Changed Sidestick to sidestick * Changed rotation paragraph * Update docs/beginner-guide/takeoff-climb-cruise.md Typo of -> off Co-authored-by: Val <reyes.nico@gmail.com> * Update docs/beginner-guide/takeoff-climb-cruise.md checkins -> check-ins Co-authored-by: Val <reyes.nico@gmail.com> * Indentation of some "!!! info" blocks changed * Grammar: allows -> allow * Fixed "takeoff" vs. "take off" and "lineup" vs. "line up" according to grammar rule (one word when noun or adjective, two words when verb) Co-authored-by: Val <reyes.nico@gmail.com> * refactor: takeoff guide assets moved to correct directory (#95) * docs(beginner-guide): Descent page (#92) * Started beginner guide descent page * Section Descent Planning - first draft * Section Descent Planning - second draft * Update to overview page and headline * Use og Navigraph charts as per their Brand Guidelines * Section Descent - first draft Added advanced arrival Planing to section "Descent planning" * Added index references and fixed several typos * Added drafts for sections Flying STAR and Approach and Intercepting ILS * Added screenshot of Flypad and various fixes. * Various fixes after proof reading * Change FlyPad screenshot to FlyPadv2 * Added link box and chapter start situation * Section Descent Planning - first draft * Formatting * Added Approach checklist Formatting * Added ATC Approach * Update after pilot reviews regarding Cabin Crew notification * Added <sub> to Navigraph copyright texts * Grammar, language and typo fixes after review. * Added period ofter list items * docs(beginner-guide): Powering Down page (#96) * Started page "Powering Down" * Initial draft without images * First draft ready for pilot review * Small fixes * Move images to correct folder * Changes after pilot review * Changes requests from proof reading * Started ILS Landing page * Basic structure * Basic structure * Draft of first section * First section Intercepting the ILS with media * First draft sections 1-4 (Landing) * First draft all sections * First proof reading and corrections * Layout fix * Update after pilot reviews * Update after pilot reviews regarding clarifications for CONFs * Small syntax fix - escaped brackets * Added period ofter list items * Started ILS Landing page * Basic structure * Basic structure * Draft of first section * First section Intercepting the ILS with media * First draft sections 1-4 (Landing) * First draft all sections * First proof reading and corrections * Layout fix * Update after pilot reviews * Update after pilot reviews regarding clarifications for CONFs * Small syntax fix - escaped brackets * Added period ofter list items * Added info about LOC vs. APPR * Change the use of LOC button to APPR after pilot feedback * Update after pilot discussion on discord #docs Added info for APPR/LOC Removed flaps retraction (part of after landing process) * Fixed typos and rename image Co-authored-by: Valastiri <reyes.nico@gmail.com> Co-authored-by: Awemeter <71922517+Awemeter@users.noreply.github.com>
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* Started page takeoff-climb-cruise.md * Updated overview page with correct reference * Added basic a320 knowledge section * Lineup, Take off, Initial climb sections drafts with images * Added section Climb Many corrections in text Optimized images (sharpness, contrast) * Corrections after a proof read * Corrections after a proof read * Cosmetic changes. Initial draft version complete * Extended Cruise section and small corrections * Extended Cruise section and small corrections * Changes reflecting pilot's feedback: 1- the order of the TCAS should be after the lights not before in the guide 2- You forgot to mention the Below the line Before takeoff checklist before starting the roll and to start the chrono 3- it's not -10* but but half forward sidestick 4- VS speed doesn't mean S peed but it means stall speed * Changed order for before take off checks "below the line" * Incorporated the second pilot feedback. * Changed T.O to T.O. * removed manual line breaks at right margin in source (relying on editor's soft wrap) * Added bullet points for "line up" "cleared for take off" * Changed flaps paragraph as per review suggestions * Added divider before 4. Climb * Used tabs to get images in one compact line * Changed Sidestick to sidestick * Changed rotation paragraph * Update docs/beginner-guide/takeoff-climb-cruise.md Typo of -> off Co-authored-by: Val <reyes.nico@gmail.com> * Update docs/beginner-guide/takeoff-climb-cruise.md checkins -> check-ins Co-authored-by: Val <reyes.nico@gmail.com> * Indentation of some "!!! info" blocks changed * Grammar: allows -> allow * Fixed "takeoff" vs. "take off" and "lineup" vs. "line up" according to grammar rule (one word when noun or adjective, two words when verb) Co-authored-by: Val <reyes.nico@gmail.com>
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* docs: add beginner-docs-readme.md * docs: add beginner guide overview.md * config: reference beginner guide overview.md in mkdocs.yml * docs: mention target branch in beginner-docs-readme.md * docs(beginner-guide): Preparing the MCDU (#58) * Add preparing-mcdu.md + add relevant nav menu item * initial sections and formatting added * init A copy * DATA copy * section dividers * flight plan finished flight plan cont. flight plan SID * change scroll keys to slew * add ofp to assets and guide * section 2 copy added section 2 copy added * INIT B copy * change line select key references to new format * restructure directory * add MCDU guide assets * utilize assets in guide * add simbrief section and images * typos + additional information * add page link to overview.md * typo line 315 * capitalize simbrief for titles only * change simbrief section titles and details * added fuel and payload warning * added next document link for continuity * typo line 311 * add suggestions in PR review + discord * docs(beginner-guide): after landing (#54) * Add on the ground.md and updated mkdocs.yml * re organize in a tabbed format * Rename page and improve tabed layout * Add pictures and fix spelling * Add pictures * Add clarity fixes and verifyed by dan da man * Add val changes docs/beginner-guide/after-landing-steps.md Co-authored-by: Val <reyes.nico@gmail.com> * remove extra comm panel * placeholder `#` for powering down * H3 change * fix alignment [comm panel] image * typos + additional information overhead panel * corrections to 2nd section Co-authored-by: Val <reyes.nico@gmail.com> * docs(beginner-guide): takeoff-climb-cruise page (#90) * Started page takeoff-climb-cruise.md * Updated overview page with correct reference * Added basic a320 knowledge section * Lineup, Take off, Initial climb sections drafts with images * Added section Climb Many corrections in text Optimized images (sharpness, contrast) * Corrections after a proof read * Corrections after a proof read * Cosmetic changes. Initial draft version complete * Extended Cruise section and small corrections * Extended Cruise section and small corrections * Changes reflecting pilot's feedback: 1- the order of the TCAS should be after the lights not before in the guide 2- You forgot to mention the Below the line Before takeoff checklist before starting the roll and to start the chrono 3- it's not -10* but but half forward sidestick 4- VS speed doesn't mean S peed but it means stall speed * Changed order for before take off checks "below the line" * Incorporated the second pilot feedback. * Changed T.O to T.O. * removed manual line breaks at right margin in source (relying on editor's soft wrap) * Added bullet points for "line up" "cleared for take off" * Changed flaps paragraph as per review suggestions * Added divider before 4. Climb * Used tabs to get images in one compact line * Changed Sidestick to sidestick * Changed rotation paragraph * Update docs/beginner-guide/takeoff-climb-cruise.md Typo of -> off Co-authored-by: Val <reyes.nico@gmail.com> * Update docs/beginner-guide/takeoff-climb-cruise.md checkins -> check-ins Co-authored-by: Val <reyes.nico@gmail.com> * Indentation of some "!!! info" blocks changed * Grammar: allows -> allow * Fixed "takeoff" vs. "take off" and "lineup" vs. "line up" according to grammar rule (one word when noun or adjective, two words when verb) Co-authored-by: Val <reyes.nico@gmail.com> * refactor: takeoff guide assets moved to correct directory (#95) * docs(beginner-guide): Descent page (#92) * Started beginner guide descent page * Section Descent Planning - first draft * Section Descent Planning - second draft * Update to overview page and headline * Use og Navigraph charts as per their Brand Guidelines * Section Descent - first draft Added advanced arrival Planing to section "Descent planning" * Added index references and fixed several typos * Added drafts for sections Flying STAR and Approach and Intercepting ILS * Added screenshot of Flypad and various fixes. * Various fixes after proof reading * Change FlyPad screenshot to FlyPadv2 * Added link box and chapter start situation * Section Descent Planning - first draft * Formatting * Added Approach checklist Formatting * Added ATC Approach * Update after pilot reviews regarding Cabin Crew notification * Added <sub> to Navigraph copyright texts * Grammar, language and typo fixes after review. * Added period ofter list items * docs(beginner-guide): Powering Down page (#96) * Started page "Powering Down" * Initial draft without images * First draft ready for pilot review * Small fixes * Move images to correct folder * Changes after pilot review * Changes requests from proof reading * Started ILS Landing page * Basic structure * Basic structure * Draft of first section * First section Intercepting the ILS with media * First draft sections 1-4 (Landing) * First draft all sections * First proof reading and corrections * Layout fix * Update after pilot reviews * Update after pilot reviews regarding clarifications for CONFs * Small syntax fix - escaped brackets * Added period ofter list items * Started ILS Landing page * Basic structure * Basic structure * Draft of first section * First section Intercepting the ILS with media * First draft sections 1-4 (Landing) * First draft all sections * First proof reading and corrections * Layout fix * Update after pilot reviews * Update after pilot reviews regarding clarifications for CONFs * Small syntax fix - escaped brackets * Added period ofter list items * Added info about LOC vs. APPR * Change the use of LOC button to APPR after pilot feedback * Update after pilot discussion on discord #docs Added info for APPR/LOC Removed flaps retraction (part of after landing process) * Fixed typos and rename image Co-authored-by: Valastiri <reyes.nico@gmail.com> Co-authored-by: Awemeter <71922517+Awemeter@users.noreply.github.com>
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