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 evolution, and soft-condensed matter physics. The scheme presented here has
 been specifically designed to simulate biochemical networks. The original
 version allows the efficient simulation of signal transduction pathways and
-gene regulation networks in the cytoplasm and recently we have also implemented
+gene regulation networks in the cytoplasm. Recently we have also implemented
 reactions at surfaces including membranes, and reactions at, and passive and
 active transport along, polymers such as microtubules and DNA.</p>
 
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 Movie (<a href="/movies/12-particles_200-steps/12-particles_200-steps.ogv">ogv</a>,
 <a href="/movies/12-particles_200-steps/12-particles_200-steps.mp4">mp4</a>). <em>A movie of
 eGFRD in action in 3D. The large spheres and cylinders are protective domains with one or two
-particles inside. The plane at the bottom represents a membrane to which particles can be bound.
-The spherical protective domains model the diffusion and reaction between bulk particles. The flat
+particles inside. The plane at the bottom represents a membrane to which particles can bind.
+The spherical protective domains model the diffusion and reaction between particles in 3D. The flat
 cylindrical protective domains are used to calculate the diffusion and reaction of particles in the membrane,
-whereas the longer cylindrical protective domains are used to model the association of a bulk particle with
+whereas the bigger cylindrical protective domains are used to model the association of a 3D particle with
 the membrane. Note that the color red is used to denote the protective domain that will be updated next.</em></p></div></div></div>
 
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