Remove words that presume knowledge #106
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@cllns Thank you. Obviously, as a non-native speaker, I'm really happy of fix my broken English. 😄 |
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Remove words that presume knowledge
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"Clearly, obviously, naturally, and of course all presume too much about the reader's knowledge and perspective and often amount to excess verbiage." - Wikipedia Manual of Style
Obviously (:wink:) we're not bound to Wikipedia's Manual of Style, but I think it's a good rule.
I left one 'actually', in the Displaying Dynamic Data of Getting Started, where it says 'If we run our feature test now, we'll see it fails — because our controller action does not actually expose the books to our view' because it seems useful.