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-<span class="written-logo">tonic</span> provides summaries of high impact publications in pediatrics. Our content is geared towards residents and medical students who need a quick reference of current evidence for rounds and details on how and when certain studies apply. Article are also broken down using the PCOS method to highlight the study design for more in depth discussion.
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+<span class="written-logo">tonic</span> provides summaries of high impact publications in pediatrics. Our content is geared towards residents and medical students who need a quick reference of current evidence for rounds and details on how and when certain studies apply. The PCOS analysis method is used to dig into the study details for times when in depth discussion is needed.
 
 ## What this site is all about
 
-* **Quick summaries** and one liners to use during rounds.
+* **Quick summaries** and one liners to quote during rounds.
 * **Caveats** that show you understand what the article actually says and if it can be applied to your patient.
 * **Rigorous analysis** using an EBM framework for when you need to sit down and dissect an article.
 * **Community** driven discussions to share your ideas.
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 This project is still in its infancy, and we would love your help! If you are interested in seeing specific articles here, want to help with summaries or web design, or have any comments, please contact me. Just use any of the links at the bottom of the page.
 
-[Lancet-Pap]: http://www.thelancet.com/journals/lancet/article/PIIS0140-6736(79)90172-7/abstract
+[Lancet-Pap]: http://www.thelancet.com/journals/lancet/article/PIIS0140-6736(79)90172-7/abstract