영어 설명문 및 문법 관련 이슈들

[kimjoy2002]

인게임 영어 설명문, 기타 문법 교정용 이슈

[dillytin]

히드라 종족 선택화면 내 설명 없음

[MinticePIU]

종족 선택 창

개요: 웬만하면 종족 이름의 복수형을 가장 앞에 서술하고 시작하자. 학파, 종족 이름 등에서 대문자 주의. 종족 이름에 특이한 복수가 많으므로 주의. 가능하다면 호주식 영어로!!!

굵은 글씨는 추가, 기울임은 주석

Mantis: Mantes are insect creatures with scythe hands and strong legs. They do leap attack automatically when approaching an enemy. Cowardly actions will make them slow.
Lesser Lich: Lesser Liches head to the Dungeon to fill their incompleteness to become a true Lich. They are good at all kinds of magic, especially Necromancy, and have excellent mana regenerative ability.
Two Headed Ogre: Two Headed Ogres dual-wield weapons and wear two amulets at once. However, they hate and never hold shields, thinking those are only for cowards.
Homunculus: Homunculi are created beings. From any origin(무슨 의도인지 모르겠음), they all have bodies that lie between life and artificial construct.
Crustacean: Crustacea have hard, but easily broken exoskeletons. They can use their cut body as a bait and run away. They are very adaptive and are able to recover their body. They grow(무슨 의도인지 모르겠음) and can create miasma foam like a crab.
Meliai: Meliades are small hybrids of human and bee with sharp stingers. Their buzzing wings move very fast, but require lots of calorie. Due to their instinct to serve higher beings(like a queen of a hive), they are naturally faithful.
Wight: Wights are ancient warriors animated as undead beings. Since they are actually skeletons, they are unable to consume any food or potions. They are adept at Necromancy and Ice Magic but learn other skills very slowly. However, they can use negative energy to infuse their melee attacks, and enchant weapon by cursing them in price for memory. (머미에서 좀 베낌)
Angel: Angels are holy species that believe in one of three good gods. They do not abandon their faith and hate evil behaviour. They do not need to eat and are resistant to various types.

[MinticePIU]

가능하다면 ?1과 ?2에 있는 도움말에도 새로운 요소를 추가하면 좋겠지만 이걸 열어 볼 사람은 거의 없을 테니 후순위로 둬도 좋겠어요.

[MinticePIU]

배경 선택 창

Caravan: Caravans visit the Dungeon to find the Orb; the best sale item on the surface. They are not good adventurers, but start with a hired mercenary, a tool to heal mercenaries, and some extra golds to give equipment to them.
Collector: Collectors always hankered to find the Orb in the Dungeon. (웬만하면 지워 버리되 꼭 필요하다면 두세요.) Collectors start with a unique scroll which lets them choose one artefact from Collector's artefact collections, but that's all.
Melted Knight: Melted Knights worship Jiyva, and are sent from the Slime Pit into the Dungeon to spread mutations and chaos. (AK 베낌)
Arcane Warrior: Arcane Warriors are melee fighters, and buff themselves with the Elements and the Charms school.

[MinticePIU]

crawl/crawl-ref/source/dat/species/에 있는 것들

added_00_angel.yaml
fake_mutations:

• long: You have a halo surrounding you.
  short: halo
• long: You do not eat.
  short: no food
• long: You can not abandon your faith except for the conversion between good gods.
  short: faithfulness
• long: Whenever you get contaminated, you also get drained.
  short: contamination causes drain (short 추가 요망)

added_06_mantis.yaml
fake_mutations:

• long: You instinctively leap towards the enemy.
  short: leap attack

added_12_homunculus.yaml / added_13_homunculus blossom.yaml / added_14_homunculus adaption.yaml
fake_mutations:

• long: Every time you cast a spell, your magic will be amplified and unstable.

added_18_sparkborn.yaml
fake_mutations:

• long: "You are immune to electricity, but lose all magic reserves in water."

GitHub 사용법을 배우든가 해야지 이렇게는 힘드네...

[youredoomed]

히드라 종족 선택화면 내 설명 없음

아 이건 좀전에 #439 에서 넣어두긴 함. 문법에 맞나 체크만 하면 됨

[dillytin]

구글 검색하면 깃헙 데스크탑, 포크 뜨는 방법 등 많이 나옴 저도 하나도 모르다가 다 검색해서 배웠음

[dillytin]

모두 수정되었습니다. 앞으로도 텍스트 관련 이슈는 이곳을 이용해주십셔

[youredoomed]

여태까지 추가된 텍스트들 중 점검이 필요한 것들 정리해서 가져옴!
어떤 맥락에서 추가된건지 알기 쉽게 관련된 커밋 링크 없으면 풀리퀘나 이슈 링크 걸어둠

crawl-ref/source/dat/descript/~ 경로에 txt 파일들로 있고
대부분의 설명문은 여기서 커밋들 한꺼번에 모아볼 수 있을거임
txt 파일 안에서 컨트롤+f로 검색해가면서 찾아가면 수정하기 수월할 거 같음

items.txt

파켈라스 로드
rod of pakellas

Prototype created by pakellas. Followers are constantly testing and upgrading
prototypes to help pakellas research. Depending on how you upgrade, the power
and use will be different.

위대한 뱀 전용 포션들
potion of swift

An unique substance, distilled from the Great Wyrm.
It contains extracted swiftness which without suffer
of sluggish when effect of swift ends.
%%%%
potion of regeneration

An unique substance, distilled from the Great Wyrm.
It contains extracted regeneration which regenerates
living, just like its original spell.
%%%%
potion of icy armour

An unique substance, distilled from the Great Wyrm.
It contains extracted icy armour of Ozocubu's, same
as its original spell.
%%%%
potion of toxic radiance

An unique substance, distilled from the Great Wyrm.
It contains extracted toxic radiance of Olgreb's,
same as its original spell.
%%%%
potion of shourd cover

An unique substance, distilled from the Great Wyrm.
It contains extracted ditstorting shourd of Golubria's,
same as its original spell.
%%%%
potion of repel missiles

An unique substance, distilled from the Great Wyrm.
It makes a repulsion field of air, to protect who
drink it, just like its original spell.
%%%%
potion of deflect missiles

An unique substance, distilled from the Great Wyrm.
It makes a deflection field of winds, to protect who
drink it, just like its original spell.
%%%%
potion of icy shield

An unique substance, distilled from the Great Wyrm.
It contains extracted icy shield, which made by
condensation, just like its original spell.
%%%%
%%%%
potion of essence Nigredo

An alchemical essence of Decay, made by the transmutation
of a potion or other essence. Drinking Nigredo causes
decay yourself, evaporate will create miasma.
%%%%
potion of essence Albedo

An alchemical essence of Purge, made by the transmutation
of a potion or other essence. Dirnking Albedo causes
magically purge yourself, evaporate will create clouds
of flame.
%%%%
potion of essence Citrinitas

An alchemical essence of Empower, made by the transmutation
of a potion or other essence. Dirnking Citrinitas empowers
your accuracy and spells, and result of evaporate isn't
specified.
%%%%
potion of essence Viriditas

An alchemical essence of Restore, made by the transmutation
of a potion or other essence. Drinking Viriditas restores
all damaged stats and cures yourself, evaporate will create
clouds of healing.
%%%%
potion of essence Rubedo

An alchemical essence of the 'end-as-begin', made by the
transmutation of a potion or other essence. Drinking Rubedo
will grants you resistances from fire, cold, electricity,
poison, and acid, and result of evaporate isn't specified.

로드 오브 스트라이킹
rod of striking

This rod is designed for melee combat, releasing its charges to deal additional
damage dependent on evocations skill when it strikes a foe. Staves skill will help
improve your basic effectiveness with the weapon.

마법책: 아랫것들을 돕는 방법
how to aid your minions

A book introducing "how to aid your minions". Unlike its exaggerated title,
the inner text contains serious issues, such as the failure of alchemists or
the specter of necromancers.

치유 안개의 플라스크
flask of healing mist

A set of flask and valve-attached diffuser. When you open the valve, an alchemical
healing mist is emitted from the inside of the flask, fills the surrounding area.
This mist provides you with only a slight amount of healing, but quickly recovers
the dwellers of the dungeon and the creatures from the spell or device.

파이프
pipe

An item that can bring mercenaries or summons to its place. if you hold it in
your inventory, you get the recall ability.

---

clouds.txt
치유 안개
healing mist cloud

A cloud of alchemical healing mist. The dwellers of the dungeon or summoned beings,
even undeads, will recover thier injury and damage within this cloud. You're not
as effective as them because you're from the ground recently, but you can still
get a healing effect from this; at a very feeble amounts.

---

gods.txt
너머의 군단
Legion from beyond

The Legion from beyond is a collection of unbridled forces that consist of
innumerable beasts, spirits, demons, and monsters, exist at the boundary
betwixt other planes. The minions of the Legion have no free will, and are
faithful to only one purpose - instinct to follow the will of the leader.
Summoners who want to control unbridled forces of the Legion contacts them,
they will obey any orders. It would be, if only the Legion were summoned,
and only the Legion would be awarded the pact to lead.
%%%%
Legion from beyond powers

Pactmakers who make a pact to lead the Legion, will learn how to summon minions
of the Legion from beyond. Those minions look no different from common summoner's,
but they're hard to abjured and obey to any order, sended by thought instantly, can
overwhelm their minds to hold their position until they die. Powerful leaders of the
Legion, can force their minions into the battle-trans when they slay enemies. Under
the control of the most dominant leader, minions of the Legion can sustain themselves
from death briefly.
%%%%
Legion from beyond wrath

When the leader of the Legion abandon them, the Legion's minions such as beast,
spirt, demon and holies, dragon, and all kinds of minions will be out of control
and start breaching into dungeon. The unbridled force of the Legion will interrupt
their old leader to unstablize summoning spells horribly, and other leader of the
Legion with powerful summoning spell will arrive to make you obey.

아그라피드
Agraphede

The primal vermin, Agraphede is the mother of all poisonous and hideous insects.
Most insects are not sentient, so they do not serve Agraphede. The worshippers of
Agraphede is mostly the weak mortals who are afraid the lethal swarm of insects,
and interested to lethality poison of those swarm. Then, Agraphede use them as the
egg-sacks and gatherers of prey, feed the swarm and become a host of the swarm,
with the gift of primal vermin; affinity for poison and abilities of poison.
%%%%
Agraphede powers

Agraphede is a very sadistic deity, enjoys worshippers' bodies becoming the hosts
of the swarm. Their body becomes a proper environment for the swarm so vulnerable
to poison. In this state, the hosts has a affinity of poison, to survive themselves
and their swarm. After then, hosts can use the poison from their bodies, to use
various abilities which originates from poisonous insects, such as spinning a web
or ignoring resistance of poison. When the swarm has grown enough, the host can
release those of hungry poisonous insects, spiders and moths from their swarm.
%%%%
Agraphede wrath

(완전히 처음부터 작성해야 함)

---

spells.txt
파편 장막
Shrapnel Curtain spell

Forms a curtain surrounded the caster, with spiny pebbles and gravels. These are
made by dusts in the Dungeon, and reacts when the caster has been attacked, will
be fired to the attacker to deal damage easily prevented by armor.

두건 악귀 소환
Summon Hooded Malice spell

Summon a wraith of fallen necromaners. It uses malicious arts to steal the
life force from victim to heal its living allies(if the caster is living,
also heals the caster), and responds with pain to attackers when its damaged.

활기찬 덩어리 소환
Summon Lively Mass spell

Summons an excessively vital amalgam. It can emit its vigor, as a form of
the aura of healing. Most creatures including undeads and non-living will be
healed rapidly in the aura, except yourself. Because of the complex origins
of the 'mass', this spell is considered as chaotic by Zin.

밀폐 방어막
Hermetic Barrier spell

Form a hermetic barrier linked with caster's health, which absorbs upcoming
damage and protects you from clouds and from exposure to to magic and elemental
effects from outside, except damage from illusionary wound or unholy torment.
However, if your barrier broken before it fades naturally, will cause aftershock,
makes you stuned and unable to teleport for a while.

로드 오브 스트라이킹(설명문 전용)
Empowered Strike spell

Release an evocational energy to target which you strike this rod. Each strikes
spend a charge of your rod.
%%%%

대규모 방어막(몬스터 전용)
Mass Barrier spell

Forms a hermetic barrier to caster and nearby allies. The durablity of barrier
is depending on the caster's maximumim health point.

---

ability.txt
골렘 아머 발동
Evoke Golem Armour ability

Activates your full set of golem armour to enhance wearer's strength
and emits sturdy forcefield to reinforce durability. Performing unarmed
strike while armour is activated, it will be destructive blow by your
boosted golem fists. Also, this form grants you resistance to negative
energy and petrification, but also makes you vulnerable to shattering
effects.

트로그: 분노의 돌진
Furious Charge ability

Costs large amount of hunger, push yourself into berserk rage to charge at an
enemy, strike with your weapon or barehands. This strike has a chance to cause
a very short daze on the target, depending on the distance between you and your
target. Whether this strike hits or misses, you immediately goes berserk.

와이트: 무기 부장품화
Burialize Weapon ability

Costs your memories of battle, causing drain yourself. Curse a weapon you wield
and enchant it. This enchantment is based on the base damage of weapon.
This is one of ways to over-enchant, and the only way to enchant artefacts.

---

feature.txt
윌 오브 어스로 메운 용암/깊은 물
A temporal floor

This floor is the one that soon disappeared. Be careful!

치유의 오라 범위
within healaura

This area is filled by healing energy, affects to the owner's allies. This healing
cannot affects you, but the owner's allies are healed 10 HP for every turns.

너머의 군단 제단
A gateway of the Legion from beyond

A tear of plane, to contact with the legion from beyond. You can sense
unbridled force waiting for you from the beyond.

아그라피드 제단
(완전히 처음부터 작성해야 함)

(이름 정해진 후 feature-data.h에서 아래 문장도 동일하게 맞출 것.)
ALTAR(DNGN_ALTAR_AGRAPHEDE, "swarming altar the Agraphede", "altar_agraphede", GREEN),

골렘 제련소 전용 지형
An arcane furnace

A furnace in which various metal boils, managed by its creations. It is
heated enough to work forever as a source of enormous golems and artifects
in the dungeon.
%%%%
A strange container

A transparent container with complex mechanism, glowing with strange light.
It seems empty, but you can feel something is inside it...

---

mons.txt
두건 악귀
hooded malice

A kind of wraith, tortured soul of necromancer which is unable to die or live.
Its necromantic arts are twisted by its suffering, become malicious, now used
to heal living allies from stolen life force to watch the fall of victim.

활기찬 덩어리
lively mass

An organic amalgam, which is excessively vital. Most of them are abandoned
failures by alchemist, created in the experiment of abyssal creatures with
positive energies from the good gods. Therefore, even though its kindly
attitude and overflowing positive energy, it is considered as a chaotic being
by Zin.

네임드 오크들(블로크 + 우루그 아스클레피아 브랜다고스)
*참고하기 좋게 기존 네임드들 설명까지 덧붙여둠

오크 블로크
Blork the orc
A particularly fat and ugly orc. He's scavenged a pair of rainbow-coloured
suspenders from somewhere. They're not helping.
%%%%
Blork the orc warrior

A particularly fat, ugly, but experienced, leather armoured and well-armed orc.
He can command a small mob of its fellows and he casts some minor magics.
%%%%
Blork the orc knight

A particularly fat and ugly orc covered in scars from many past battles.
It commands its brethren in battle, rousing them to greater, more violent efforts
with bloodcurdling shouts.
%%%%
Blork the orc warlord

A particularly fat and ugly orc. He is a supreme commander of an orc host, skilled
at both melee and ranged combat. Unlike other warlords, he casts some minor magics.

우루그, 오크 발리스타
Urug

A coarse and lanky orc. Urug lost her eye in a fight with a harpy, and has
sworn to slay every last one of them. Unfortunately, the vision in her
remaining eye is not very good, and she has mistaken you for one.
%%%%
Urug the Orcish Culverin

A coarse and lanky orc. Urug lost her eye in a fight with a harpy, and has
sworn to slay every last one of them. A long time passes, but her revenge
have not been finished. She still traces the scent of harpy with her canine
familiars.

아스클레피아
Asclepia

An Orcish herbalist, who brings some potion and incense which made by herself.
Her therapy is based by unknown herbs from the Dungeon and some 'additives', such
as blood and remains. Because she wears specialized scarf; which protects herself
from after-effects of therapy, she is immune to clouds.
%%%%
Asclepia the Anointer

An Orcish herbalist, who brings some potion and incense which made by herself.
Now she serves Beogh as an anointer, and perform her therapy as the blessed
art of healing which under the Beogh's favour.

브랜다고스
Brandagoth

Lava orcs are the dweller of below the Dungeon, but unlike other lava orcs,
Brandagoth focus his inner temperature to move normally and cast fire magic;
which burning down his enemies. Still, he can swim in the lava and vulnerable
to cold.
%%%%
Brandagoth the Flame

Lava orcs were once denied by other false messiah, being called 'imitations'.
But now, the true messiah leads them to hands of Beogh. Brandagoth, called
as 'Incinerator of Unbelievers', now serves his true faith and damns enemies
against the messiah with destructive damnation.

골렘 제련소 전용 몹들(1 2 3)
animated armour

A set animated armour, armed with artifacts; including itself.
%%%%
orange crystal golem

A sturdy golem, made of translucent orange crystal that affect your mind.
%%%%
plutonium golem

A glowing golem, made of mystery material. It seems extremely dangerous.
%%%%
repair machine

A machine that uses evocational energy as a power source. It is able to emit
its energy as a form of restorative aura.
%%%%
lava golem

A a golem in shape that just walked out of the furnace.
%%%%
lava golem

A a golem in shape that just walked out of the furnace.
%%%%
barrier golem

An animated figure made completely of electricity, providing enormous
protective energy to itself and nearby allies. It works as a high-leveled
security procedure, to takedown intruder who is too greedy to survive.

---

branches.txt
골렘 제련소
Golemforge 이름 수정하면 크래시 발생 가능

Where are the numerous weapons, armours, and nameless artefacts of the Dungeon
made? The answer is; Right here, in the Forge of Golems. There is the furnace,
heated almost eternally, works as a melting pot of all kinds of materials and
magic. There are the golems, created from the Forge and creating another artefacts
from the Forge. So the value of this place is enormous, not to mention it, but
also a lot of artifacts created here will show those "ego" to intruders.

---

여기서 내가 작업했거나 플레이해본 것들은 이게 어떤 의도로 쓰인 문장인지 물어보면 알려드릴 수 있을거같음

• 두건 악귀(hooded malice)라는 이름은 딥엘프 고위 사제가 쓰는 악의의 공물(malign offering)에서 따온 조어임.
• 활기찬 덩어리(lively mass)라는 이름은 저주받은 별덩어리(starcursed mass)를 기반으로 함. 어비스에서 불러낸 별덩어리를 연금술사가 마개조하다 실패한걸 대충 내다버린건데, 생명력을 뿜어대는 세포 덩어리라고 생각하면 됨.
• 너머의 군단은 저그나 플러드, 타이라니드같은 애들 떠올리면 정확함. 원래는 로마 군단 컨셉도 껴있었다는데 그거까지 넣으려니까 서로 충돌하는 내용이 많아서 그건 빼고 새로 만들어서 넣어뒀음. 위치 지정과 불멸의 군단도 플레이어가 소환수를 완전히 지배해서 움직임까지 통제하는/죽음(송환)을 강제로 유예시키는 권능이라고 보면 됨.
• 밀폐 방어막은 피해 흡수 + 구름 및 마법 면역 + 속성별 부가효과로부터 보호 효과를 제공함. 밀폐라는 이름답게 외부로부터 오는 영향을 대부분 차단하기 때문. 이미 걸려 있는 독이나, 실제로 상처를 입지는 않았지만 몸이 그렇게 반응하도록 속이는 Flay 주문, 투사체나 휘광, 빔 날리는거 없이 그냥 생명체에게 극심한 고통을 야기하는 토먼트는 못 막는 이유도 방어막 내부에서 일어나는 피해라서 그럼. 시스템상으로는 효율적인 방어막 사용을 위해서고.
• 골렘 제련소는 골렘들로 가득하고, 랜다트로 가득하고, 랜다트가 움직여서 플레이어를 막는다는 설정의 움직이는 갑옷들도 나오는 미니던전임. 이곳에 있는 '용암'은 전용 지형으로 모습이 바뀌는데, 이곳이 던전에 가득한 골렘과 랜다트를 만들던 곳이라 그럼. branches.txt에 들어갈 내용이 이런 내용임.