Revise wording for Secret concept

content/en/docs/concepts/configuration/secret.md

@@ -12,26 +12,33 @@ weight: 30
 
 <!-- overview -->
 
-Kubernetes Secrets let you store and manage sensitive information, such
-as passwords, OAuth tokens, and ssh keys. Storing confidential information in a Secret
-is safer and more flexible than putting it verbatim in a
-{{< glossary_tooltip term_id="pod" >}} definition or in a
-{{< glossary_tooltip text="container image" term_id="image" >}}.
-See [Secrets design document](https://git.k8s.io/community/contributors/design-proposals/auth/secrets.md) for more information.
-
 A Secret is an object that contains a small amount of sensitive data such as
 a password, a token, or a key. Such information might otherwise be put in a
-Pod specification or in an image. Users can create Secrets and the system
-also creates some Secrets.
+{{< glossary_tooltip term_id="pod" >}} specification or in a
+{{< glossary_tooltip text="container image" term_id="image" >}}. Using a
+Secret means that you don't need to include confidential data in your
+application code.
+
+Because Secrets can be created independently of the Pods that use them, there
+is less risk of the Secret (and its data) being exposed during the workflow of
+creating, viewing, and editing Pods. Kubernetes, and applications that run in
+your cluster, can also take additional precautions with Secrets, such as
+avoiding writing confidential data to nonvolatile storage.
+
+Secrets are similar to {{< glossary_tooltip text="ConfigMaps" term_id="configmap" >}}
+but are specifically intended to hold confidential data.
 
 {{< caution >}}
-Kubernetes Secrets are, by default, stored as unencrypted base64-encoded
-strings. By default they can be retrieved - as plain text - by anyone with API
-access, or anyone with access to Kubernetes' underlying data store, etcd. In
-order to safely use Secrets, it is recommended you (at a minimum):
+Kubernetes Secrets are, by default, stored unencrypted in the API server's underlying data store (etcd). Anyone with API access can retrieve or modify a Secret, and so can anyone with access to etcd.
+Additionally, anyone who is authorized to create a Pod in a namespace can use that access to read any Secret in that namespace; this includes indirect access such as the ability to create a Deployment.
+
+In order to safely use Secrets, take at least the following steps:
 
 1. [Enable Encryption at Rest](/docs/tasks/administer-cluster/encrypt-data/) for Secrets.
-2. [Enable or configure RBAC rules](/docs/reference/access-authn-authz/authorization/) that restrict reading and writing the Secret. Be aware that secrets can be obtained implicitly by anyone with the permission to create a Pod.
+2. Enable or configure [RBAC rules](/docs/reference/access-authn-authz/authorization/) that
+   restrict reading data in Secrets (including via indirect means).
+3. Where appropriate, also use mechanisms such as RBAC to limit which principals are allowed to create new Secrets or replace existing ones.
+
 {{< /caution >}}
 
 <!-- body -->
@@ -47,6 +54,10 @@ A Secret can be used with a Pod in three ways:
 - As [container environment variable](#using-secrets-as-environment-variables).
 - By the [kubelet when pulling images](#using-imagepullsecrets) for the Pod.
 
+The Kubernetes control plane also uses Secrets; for example,
+[bootstrap token Secrets](#bootstrap-token-secrets) are a mechanism to
+help automate node registration.
+
 The name of a Secret object must be a valid
 [DNS subdomain name](/docs/concepts/overview/working-with-objects/names#dns-subdomain-names).
 You can specify the `data` and/or the `stringData` field when creating a
@@ -407,9 +418,9 @@ stringData:
 
 There are several options to create a Secret:
 
-- [create Secrets using `kubectl` command](/docs/tasks/configmap-secret/managing-secret-using-kubectl/)
-- [create Secrets from config file](/docs/tasks/configmap-secret/managing-secret-using-config-file/)
-- [create Secrets using kustomize](/docs/tasks/configmap-secret/managing-secret-using-kustomize/)
+- [create Secret using `kubectl` command](/docs/tasks/configmap-secret/managing-secret-using-kubectl/)
+- [create Secret from config file](/docs/tasks/configmap-secret/managing-secret-using-config-file/)
+- [create Secret using kustomize](/docs/tasks/configmap-secret/managing-secret-using-kustomize/)
 
 ## Editing a Secret
 
@@ -1164,7 +1175,7 @@ limit access using [authorization policies](
 Secrets often hold values that span a spectrum of importance, many of which can
 cause escalations within Kubernetes (e.g. service account tokens) and to
 external systems. Even if an individual app can reason about the power of the
-secrets it expects to interact with, other apps within the same namespace can
+Secrets it expects to interact with, other apps within the same namespace can
 render those assumptions invalid.
 
 For these reasons `watch` and `list` requests for secrets within a namespace are
@@ -1236,10 +1247,8 @@ for secret data, so that the secrets are not stored in the clear into {{< glossa
    if the API server policy does not allow that user to read the Secret, the user could
    run a Pod which exposes the secret.
 
-
 ## {{% heading "whatsnext" %}}
 
-- Learn how to [manage Secrets using `kubectl`](/docs/tasks/configmap-secret/managing-secret-using-kubectl/)
-- Learn how to [manage Secrets using config file](/docs/tasks/configmap-secret/managing-secret-using-config-file/)
-- Learn how to [manage Secrets using kustomize](/docs/tasks/configmap-secret/managing-secret-using-kustomize/)
-
+- Learn how to [manage Secret using `kubectl`](/docs/tasks/configmap-secret/managing-secret-using-kubectl/)
+- Learn how to [manage Secret using config file](/docs/tasks/configmap-secret/managing-secret-using-config-file/)
+- Learn how to [manage Secret using kustomize](/docs/tasks/configmap-secret/managing-secret-using-kustomize/)