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SITCOMTN-076.tex

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 We recognize that there is a tension between data security needs, public outreach and communications effectiveness, collaboration and transparency with the Rubin Observatory science community, and providing equitable access to science-ready data products, all while commissioning a complex new system with a large geographically distributed team.
 In general, we are trying to maintain a broadly open system for Rubin Observatory.
 This implies that community members have access to a wealth of other information about Rubin Observatory, aside from the embargoed pixel data.
-During commission, much of the communication will be about problems that are actively being worked.
+During commissioning, much of the communication will be about problems that are actively being worked.
 We expect the community to be respectful of this information and consider the state of the system, which in commissioning, is not finished.
-\textit{Much of the information accessible on Rubin Observatory communication channels (e.g., development branches on github, Slack, Jira, Confluence) should be treated as work in progress of professional colleagues and collaborators.}
+\textit{Much of the information that is accessible on Rubin Observatory communication channels (e.g., development branches on github, Slack, Jira, Confluence) should be treated as the work in progress of professional colleagues and collaborators.}
 \href{https://www.lsst.org/about/dei/kindness}{Be kind}.
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