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Fix confusing wording in the sign in banner
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ClearlyClaire committed Dec 19, 2022
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return (
<div className='sign-in-banner'>
<p><FormattedMessage id='sign_in_banner.text' defaultMessage='Sign in to follow profiles or hashtags, favourite, share and reply to posts, or interact from your account on a different server.' /></p>
<p><FormattedMessage id='sign_in_banner.text' defaultMessage='Sign in to follow profiles or hashtags, favourite, share and reply to posts (you can also interact from your account on a different server).' /></p>
<a href='/auth/sign_in' className='button button--block'><FormattedMessage id='sign_in_banner.sign_in' defaultMessage='Sign in' /></a>
{signupButton}
</div>
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2 changes: 1 addition & 1 deletion app/javascript/mastodon/locales/defaultMessages.json
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"id": "sign_in_banner.create_account"
},
{
"defaultMessage": "Sign in to follow profiles or hashtags, favourite, share and reply to posts, or interact from your account on a different server.",
"defaultMessage": "Sign in to follow profiles or hashtags, favourite, share and reply to posts (you can also interact from your account on a different server).",
"id": "sign_in_banner.text"
},
{
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2 changes: 1 addition & 1 deletion app/javascript/mastodon/locales/en.json
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"server_banner.server_stats": "Server stats:",
"sign_in_banner.create_account": "Create account",
"sign_in_banner.sign_in": "Sign in",
"sign_in_banner.text": "Sign in to follow profiles or hashtags, favourite, share and reply to posts, or interact from your account on a different server.",
"sign_in_banner.text": "Sign in to follow profiles or hashtags, favourite, share and reply to posts (you can also interact from your account on a different server).",
"status.admin_account": "Open moderation interface for @{name}",
"status.admin_status": "Open this post in the moderation interface",
"status.block": "Block @{name}",
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@samuk samuk commented on 7b8cd26 Jan 18, 2023

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This proposed text includes one sentence> 30 syllables and one sentence > 20 syllables.

If this could be reduced it would be readable by more people. Ref: https://app.readable.com/text/?demo

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