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Make content more clear on the term "items" #28302

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couci opened this issue Jul 31, 2023 · 1 comment · Fixed by #30083
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Make content more clear on the term "items" #28302

couci opened this issue Jul 31, 2023 · 1 comment · Fixed by #30083
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couci commented Jul 31, 2023

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https://developer.mozilla.org/en-US/docs/Web/Privacy

What specific section or headline is this issue about?

Under "Defining privacy terms and concepts" on bullet "privacy"

What information was incorrect, unhelpful, or incomplete?

On the bullet privacy it is written:
"Users must be given a chance to consent to your terms of data usage, have access to the items of their data you are storing, and delete it if they no longer wish you to have it"

What did you expect to see?

The term "items" can be confusing for the reader and rather general. I suggest we change to personal data instead.

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@couci couci added the needs triage Triage needed by staff and/or partners. Automatically applied when an issue is opened. label Jul 31, 2023
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couci commented Jul 31, 2023

@chrisdavidmills fyi since you wrote the revision of this, I would like your opinion

@Josh-Cena Josh-Cena added Content:Other Any docs not covered by another "Content:" label and removed needs triage Triage needed by staff and/or partners. Automatically applied when an issue is opened. labels Jul 31, 2023
himanshugarg added a commit to himanshugarg/content that referenced this issue Nov 7, 2023
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Fixes mdn#28302: Removes unnecessary words
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Fixes #28302 - Simplifies language (#30083)
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* Fixes #28302: Removes unnecessary words

* Update index.md

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Co-authored-by: Vadim Makeev <hi@pepelsbey.dev>
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