fix: Improve translated text #13628

pocketdr · 2023-06-08T07:41:23Z

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纠正机翻痕迹，改善翻译文本

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URL: /zh-CN/docs/Web/HTTP/Overview
Title: HTTP 概述
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- /zh-CN/docs/Glossary/port does not exist but fell back to /en-US/docs/Glossary/Port

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URL: /zh-CN/docs/Web/HTTP/Overview
Title: HTTP 概述

https://firefox-source-docs.mozilla.org/devtools-user/network_monitor/index.html (1 time) (Note! This may be a new URL 👀)
https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/QUIC (1 time) (Note! This may be a new URL 👀)

(comment last updated: 2023-06-10 07:28:25)

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pocketdr · 2023-06-09T04:39:02Z

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user-agent 这一点，我查了资料之后觉得最好是不翻译，proxy 与 agent 实际上是不同的东西，都用代理会导致混乱，但我也没有找到更好的翻译，所以我在提到代理的地方都会有说明 agent 和 proxy
关于破折号，我不希望改成括号，如果需要修改话我更倾向于调整短句的位置，因为破折号的地方在原文实际上不是加括号的补充说明而是句子的一部分

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yin1999 · 2023-06-09T05:09:59Z

user-agent 这一点，我查了资料之后觉得最好是不翻译，proxy 与 agent 实际上是不同的东西，都用代理会导致混乱，但我也没有找到更好的翻译，所以我在提到代理的地方都会有说明 agent 和 proxy

用户代理是一个很常见的翻译：https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E7%94%A8%E6%88%B7%E4%BB%A3%E7%90%86

chrome 控制台：

关于破折号，我不希望改成括号，如果需要修改话我更倾向于调整短句的位置，因为破折号的地方在原文实际上不是加括号的补充说明而是句子的一部分

可以不修改

pocketdr · 2023-06-09T07:01:37Z

这种综述类的文章，个人觉得需要考虑到第一次见到“用户代理”与“代理”这两个词，并且区分不了两种“代理”之间区别的读者。

我大概修改了一下，在文章对 user-agent 做出解释前用单词，做出解释后用“用户代理”。：）

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Thanks

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