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diff --git a/docs/dapp-development/mainnet.md b/docs/dapp-development/mainnet.md
@@ -70,5 +70,5 @@ More Nebulas APIs at [RPC](https://github.com/nebulasio/wiki/blob/master/rpc.md)
 
 ## Contribution
 
-Feel free to join Nebulas Mainnet. If you did find something wrong, please [submit a issue](https://github.com/nebulasio/go-nebulas/issues/new) or [submit a pull request](https://github.com/nebulasio/go-nebulas/pulls) to let us know, we will add your name and url to this page soon.
+Feel free to join the Nebulas Mainnet. If you have found something wrong, please [submit an issue](https://github.com/nebulasio/go-nebulas/issues/new) or [submit a pull request](https://github.com/nebulasio/go-nebulas/pulls) to let us know, and we will add your name and url to this page as soon as possible.
 
diff --git a/docs/overview.md b/docs/overview.md
@@ -1,28 +1,28 @@
 # Overview
 
 {% hint style="info" %}
-This Guide is in progress. Welcome to edit it and help more users and developers in the Nebulas ecosystem.
+This Guide is in progress. We welcome all to edit it and help more users and developers in the Nebulas ecosystem.
 {% endhint %}
 
 ## **Nebulas** is a next-generation public blockchain, aiming for a continuously improving ecosystem. 
 
 ## Introduction
 
-This documentation is created by Nebulas fans. We welcome everyone to help us.
+This documentation was created and is maintained by Nebulas fans. We welcome everyone to help us.
 
-This documentation includes three parts:
+This documentation is divided in three parts:
 
 #### 1 Introduction. 
 
-What's Nebulas? Principles, technology features, history, community, Nebulas Foundations and many others. Everything about Nebulas.
+What's Nebulas? Principles, technology features, history, community, Nebulas Foundations, and many other such things. Everything about Nebulas.
 
 #### 2 Go-Nebulas.
 
 Roadmap, papers.
 
 #### 3 DApp Development.
 
-How to build a Dapp on Nebulas, tutorials.
+How to build a DApp on Nebulas, tutorials.
 
 
 
diff --git a/docs/tutorials-1.md b/docs/tutorials-1.md
@@ -5,14 +5,14 @@ Here is all you need to dive into Nebulas.
 ## NebulasIO
 
 * Website：[https://nebulas.io](https://nebulas.io)
-* Non-Tech Whitepaper：[https://nebulas.io/docs/NebulasWhitepaperZh.pdf](https://nebulas.io/docs/NebulasWhitepaperZh.pdf)
-* Tech Whitepaper：[https://nebulas.io/docs/NebulasTechnicalWhitepaperZh.pdf](https://nebulas.io/docs/NebulasTechnicalWhitepaperZh.pdf)
+* Non-Tech Whitepaper：[https://nebulas.io/docs/NebulasWhitepaperZh.pdf](https://nebulas.io/docs/NebulasWhitepaper.pdf)
+* Tech Whitepaper：[https://nebulas.io/docs/NebulasTechnicalWhitepaperZh.pdf](https://nebulas.io/docs/NebulasTechnicalWhitepaper.pdf)
 
 ## Go-Nebulas
 
 * Wiki: [https://github.com/nebulasio/wiki](https://github.com/nebulasio/wiki)
-* Join Testnet: [https://github.com/nebulasio/wiki/blob/master/testnet.md](https://github.com/nebulasio/wiki/blob/master/testnet.md)
-* Join Mainnet: [https://github.com/nebulasio/wiki/blob/master/mainnet.md](https://github.com/nebulasio/wiki/blob/master/mainnet.md)
+* Join the Testnet: [https://github.com/nebulasio/wiki/blob/master/testnet.md](https://github.com/nebulasio/wiki/blob/master/testnet.md)
+* Join the Mainnet: [https://github.com/nebulasio/wiki/blob/master/mainnet.md](https://github.com/nebulasio/wiki/blob/master/mainnet.md)
 * Explorer: [https://explorer.nebulas.io](https://explorer.nebulas.io)
 * Tutorials:
   * English 101
@@ -61,5 +61,5 @@ Here is all you need to dive into Nebulas.
 
 ## Contribution
 
-We are very glad that you are considering to write tutorials or documents of Nebulas. If you did write something, please [submit a issue](https://github.com/nebulasio/wiki/issues/new) to let us know, we will add your name and url to this page soon.
+We are very glad that you are considering to write tutorials or documents about Nebulas. If you did write something, please [submit an issue](https://github.com/nebulasio/wiki/issues/new) to let us know, and we will add your name and url to this page as soon as possible.
 
diff --git a/docs/whats-nebulas/README.md b/docs/whats-nebulas/README.md
@@ -4,11 +4,11 @@
 
 ### Nebulas is aiming to build a continuously improving ecosystem. {#93bb}
 
-Nebulas is a next-generation public blockchain. It introduces Nebulas Rank \(NR\), a new measure of value for every unit of the blockchain universe, like addresses, DApps and smart contracts. Based on NR, it involves Nebulas Incentive \(NI\), which incentives developers with Developer Incentive Protocol, and users with the Proof of Devotion consensus algorithm. Moreover, it proposes Nebulas Force \(NF\), which gives the blockchain and smart contracts within it a self-evolving capacity. In unison, NR, NI, and NF produce a continuously improving and expanding blockchain ecosystem.
+Nebulas is a next-generation public blockchain. It introduces the Nebulas Rank \(NR\), a new measure of value for every unit of the blockchain universe, like addresses, DApps and smart contracts. Based on the NR, the Nebulas Incentive \(NI\) was created, whose goal is to motivate developers with the Developer Incentive Protocol, and users with the Proof of Devotion consensus algorithm. Moreover, it proposes Nebulas Force \(NF\), which gives the blockchain and smart contracts within it a self-evolving capacity. In unison, the NR, the NI, and the NF produce a continuously improving and expanding blockchain ecosystem.
 
 There are three technical features: value ranking, self-evolution, and native incentive.
 
-Facing the opportunity and challenge as above, we aim to create a self-evolving blockchain system based on value incentive.
+Facing the aforementioned challenges and opportunities, we aim to create a self-evolving blockchain system based on value incentive.
 
 ![](https://cdn-images-1.medium.com/max/1600/1*8YETuI_IvyjXvlvnzbBWnw.png)
 
@@ -18,23 +18,23 @@ The Nebulas blockchain has three major principles:
 
 ### Value ranking 
 
-To enable value discovery in blockchain, **Nebulas Rank** measures multidimensional data in the blockchain world and powers the decentralized search framework. 
+To enable value discovery on the blockchain, the **Nebulas Rank** measures multidimensional data in the blockchain world and powers the decentralized search framework. 
 
 ### Self-evolution 
 
-To avoid the damage caused by forking to the blockchain, **Nebulas Force** enables rapid iteration and upgradability to its blockchain without the need for hard forks. 
+To avoid the damage caused by the forking of the blockchain, **Nebulas Force** enables rapid iteration and upgradability to its blockchain without the need for hard forks. 
 
 ### Native incentives
 
-With forward-looking incentive and consensus mechanisms, the **Nebulas Incentive** rewards developers and users who contribute to the sustainability and growth of the ecosystem.
+With forward-looking incentives and the consensus mechanisms, the **Nebulas Incentive** rewards developers and users who contribute to the sustainability and growth of the ecosystem.
 
 
 
 
 
-This is the except of Nebulas Non-technical Whitepaper.
+This is an excerpt of the Nebulas Non-technical Whitepaper.
 
-If you want to know more about Nebulas, please subscribe this official blog, or visit our website: [nebulas.io](https://nebulas.io/). Read our Non-technical White Paper \([English](https://nebulas.io/docs/NebulasWhitepaper.pdf)\), Technical White Paper \([English](https://nebulas.io/docs/NebulasTechnicalWhitepaper.pdf)\).
+If you want to know more about Nebulas, please subscribe to the official blog, or visit our website: [nebulas.io](https://nebulas.io/). Read our Non-technical White Paper \([English](https://nebulas.io/docs/NebulasWhitepaper.pdf)\), Technical White Paper \([English](https://nebulas.io/docs/NebulasTechnicalWhitepaper.pdf)\).
 
 Thank you.
 
diff --git a/docs/whats-nebulas/README.rst b/docs/whats-nebulas/README.rst
@@ -45,23 +45,23 @@ To enable value discovery in blockchain, **Nebulas Rank** measures
 multidimensional data in the blockchain world and powers the
 decentralized search framework.
 
-:doc:`Native incentives <nebulas-force>`
+:doc:`Self-evolution <nebulas-force>`
 ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
 
 To avoid the damage caused by forking to the blockchain, **Nebulas
 Force** enables rapid iteration and upgradability to its blockchain
 without the need for hard forks.
 
-:doc:`Nebulas Incentives <nebulas-incentive-ni>`
+:doc:`Native incentives <nebulas-incentive-ni>`
 ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
 
 With forward-looking incentive and consensus mechanisms, the **Nebulas
 Incentive** rewards developers and users who contribute to the
 sustainability and growth of the ecosystem.
 
-This is the except of Nebulas Non-technical Whitepaper.
+This is an excerpt of the Nebulas Non-technical Whitepaper.
 
-If you want to know more about Nebulas, please subscribe this official
+If you want to know more about Nebulas, please subscribe to the official
 blog, or visit our website: `nebulas.io <https://nebulas.io/>`__. Read
 our Non-technical White Paper
 (`English <https://nebulas.io/docs/NebulasWhitepaper.pdf>`__), Technical