Incorporate feedback from Robbie Morrison and Frauke Wiese

Also added link to Stefan Pfenninger's Nature article

README.org

@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
 
 * Slides for presentation about Open Energy Modelling Initiative at Open Power System Data Final Workshop 10.07.2017
 
-These slides are for a 10-minute talk to be given by Tom Brown about
+These slides are for a 10-minute talk by Tom Brown about
 the [[http://openmod-initiative.org/][Open Energy Modelling Initiative]] at the [[http://open-power-system-data.org/][Open Power System Data]]
 project [[http://open-power-system-data.org/workshop-4][4th and Final Workshop]] on 10th July 2017.
 

openmod-opsd-170710.tex

@@ -68,14 +68,20 @@
   \emph{Tom Brown, Robbie Morrison, The Open Energy Modelling Initiative Community}
 }
 
-\date{\vspace{0.5cm}Open Power System Data 4th Workshop, DIW Berlin, 10th July 2017}
+\date{\vspace{0.5cm}Open Power System Data 4th Workshop, DIW Berlin, 10 July 2017}
 
 
 \titlegraphic{%
   \vspace{0.7cm}
   % left bottom right top
   \includegraphics[width=12.5cm]{openmod-logo-vector}
 
+  \vspace{4.5cm}
+
+  {\small
+  Slides licensed under
+  \href{http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by/4.0/}{Creative Commons
+  Attribution 4.0 International Licence}. \ccby}
 }
 
 
@@ -88,12 +94,11 @@
   \frametitle{openmod: overview}
 
 \begin{itemize}
-  \item \alert{grass roots community} of open energy modellers from universities
-  and research institutions
+  \item \alert{grass roots community} of open energy modellers from universities,
+  research institutions and the interested public
   \item participants mainly from Europe, but also from Africa, America,
     and Australia
-  \item first meeting Berlin 18–19 September 2014 as an off-shoot of
-    strommarkttreffen (some founding members started OPSD)
+  \item first meeting Berlin 18–19 September 2014 (some founding members started OPSD)
   \item promoting \alert{open code}, \alert{open data} and \alert{open science}
 \end{itemize}
 \end{frame}
@@ -102,13 +107,12 @@
 \begin{frame}
   \frametitle{what is open modelling?}
 
-  \alert{Open} refers to model source code that can be studied,
-  changed and improved as well as freely available energy system data. The \alert{whole pipeline} should be open:
+  \alert{Open} refers to model source code and energy system datasets that can be freely used, studied, improved and distributed. The \alert{whole pipeline} should be open:
 
   \centering
   \includegraphics[width=10cm]{open-modeling-chain}
 
-  \source{Robbie Morrison, Eva Schmid, CC 4.0 BY}
+  \source{Robbie Morrison, Eva Schmid, openmod contributers, CC BY 4.0}
 \end{frame}
 
 
@@ -117,17 +121,25 @@
 
   openness \dots
   \begin{itemize}
-  \item \dots increases \alert{transparency}, \alert{reproducibility}
+  \item increases \alert{transparency}, \alert{reproducibility}
     and \alert{credibility}, which lead to better research and policy
     advice  (no more `black boxes')
-  \item \dots \emph{can} improve research \alert{quality}
-  \item  \dots reduces
+  \item \emph{can} improve research \alert{quality}
+  \item  reduces
     \alert{duplication of effort} and frees time  to develop
     \alert{new ideas}
-  \item \dots allows easier \alert{collaboration}
-  \item \dots is essential given increasing \alert{complexity} of the energy system
+  \item allows easier \alert{collaboration}
+  \item is essential given the increasing \alert{complexity} of the energy system
   \end{itemize}
-  \end{frame}
+
+  \vspace{0.5cm}
+
+  {\footnotesize See also S. Pfenninger, `\href{https://dx.doi.org/10.1038/542393a}{Energy scientists must show their workings},' Nature, V542, p393, 2017.}
+
+\end{frame}
+
+
+
 
 
 
@@ -170,7 +182,7 @@
 \begin{frame}
   \frametitle{what is the openmod initiative?}
 
-  The openmod initiative consists of a public \alert{\href{https://groups.google.com/forum/\#!forum/openmod-initiative}{mailing list}} (300+ participants) \dots
+  The openmod initiative consists of a public \alert{\href{https://groups.google.com/forum/\#!forum/openmod-initiative}{mailing list}} (370+ participants) \dots
 
   \centering
   \includegraphics[width=12cm]{openmod-mailing_list}
@@ -205,7 +217,7 @@
 
   \vspace{.5cm}
 
-  Next Workshop: Technical University of Munich, 11th - 13th October 2017
+  Next Workshop: {\bf Technical University of Munich, 11-13 October 2017}
 
   \begin{itemize}
   \item  tutorials on open software tools and open energy models
@@ -224,11 +236,11 @@
   \begin{itemize}
   \item   good practice in open source projects
   \item barriers to developing open source projects
-  \item helping data owners understand the consequences of openness
+  \item helping data owners understand the merits of openness
   \item energy data and metadata standards
   \item energy model classification and cataloguing
   \item open/free/libre software and data licensing
-  \item    better research computing skills
+  \item improved research computing skills
   \end{itemize}
 \end{frame}
 
@@ -237,10 +249,10 @@
 
   There is no application process or membership fee. Simply \dots
   \begin{itemize}
-  \item \dots join the \alert{\href{https://groups.google.com/forum/\#!forum/openmod-initiative}{mailing list}}
-  \item \dots join the online \alert{\href{https://forum.openmod-initiative.org/}{forum}}
-  \item \dots check out the \alert{\href{http://openmod-initiative.org/}{website}}
-  \item \dots come to the next \alert{\href{https://wiki.openmod-initiative.org/wiki/Open_Energy_Modelling_Workshop_-_Munich_2017}{workshop}}: 11th-13th October 2017,
+  \item join the \alert{\href{https://groups.google.com/forum/\#!forum/openmod-initiative}{mailing list}}
+  \item join the online \alert{\href{https://forum.openmod-initiative.org/}{forum}}
+  \item check out the \alert{\href{http://openmod-initiative.org/}{website}}
+  \item come to the next \alert{\href{https://wiki.openmod-initiative.org/wiki/Open_Energy_Modelling_Workshop_-_Munich_2017}{workshop}}: 11-13 October 2017,
     Technical University of Munich
   \end{itemize}
 
@@ -250,6 +262,9 @@
 
   Unless otherwise stated, the graphics and text are Copyright \copyright Tom Brown, Robbie Morrison, 2017.
 
+  The   LaTeX and graphics are available at:\\ {\small\url{https://github.com/openmod-initiative/opsd-final-workshop-slides}}.
+
+
   The graphics and text for which no other attribution are given are licensed under a
   \href{http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by/4.0/}{Creative Commons
   Attribution 4.0 International Licence}.