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-                    <strong>Information on deadline</strong>
-                    Your city&rsquo;s data at your fingertips, available at the speed of breaking news.
+                    <strong>Information on a deadline</strong>
+                    The newsroom&rsquo;s data at your fingertips, available at the speed of breaking news.
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                     <strong>Smarter, not harder</strong>
-                    Data stuck on a hard drive is sad data. PANDA helps reporters share, and tells you when someone else adds data you care about.
+                    Subscribe to your favorite searches to get an email when news happens.
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                     <strong>Institutional memory</strong>
-                    People are going to leave, but your data shouldn&rsquo;t leave with them. Make it faster for new reporters to find stories in data.
+                    People are going to leave, but your data shouldn&rsquo;t. Make it faster for new reporters to find stories in data.
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                     <strong>Newsroom born &amp; raised</strong>
-                    The Knight Foundation funded this software, built by news developers and free for you. PANDA is now sustained by the generous support of IRE.
+                    PANDA was built by newsroom developers, with the support of The Knight Foundation. It is sustained by Investigative Reporters and Editors.
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-                    A place for teams <a href="/docs/uploading.html">to share spreadsheets</a>
+                    A place for teams to <a href="/docs/uploading.html">share spreadsheets</a>
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-                    A place to keep <a href="/docs/storing-related-files.html">your FOIA requests</a>
+                    A place to keep your <a href="/docs/storing-related-files.html">FOIA requests</a>
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                     A <a href="/docs/searching-for-names.html">search engine</a> for your names, phone numbers and more
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-            <p>&hellip; and in use at Chicago Tribune, The Dallas Morning News, and many other news organizations.</p>
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stylesheets/main.css

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