Minor language tweaks.

Raku · Mar 24, 2014 · a30bb46 · a30bb46
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diff --git a/S22-package-format.pod b/S22-package-format.pod
@@ -17,7 +17,7 @@ Synopsis 22: Distributions, Recommendations, Delivery and Installation
 
 =head1 Terminology
 
-Because many of the concepts used in this document, may be overloaded by
+Because many of the concepts used in this document may be overloaded by
 other concepts in the mind of the reader, it seems like a good idea to define
 some terminology first.  Please note that these definitions only apply within
 the context of Perl 6.
@@ -58,10 +58,10 @@ instance:
 Please note that by changing the C<::> from the module specification to a
 C<-> for the filename of the archive, we are effectively disallowing an owner
 to upload a distribution for "JSON-Fast" and "JSON::Fast" at the same time.
-This seems like not a likely thing to become a problem.
+This seems unlikely to become a problem.
 
-A Perl 6 distribution B<must> contain a configuration file named C<META6.json>
-and contain JSON encoded information about the contents of the distribution.
+A Perl 6 distribution B<must> contain a configuration file named C<META6.json>,
+containing JSON-encoded information about the contents of the distribution.
 
 =head2 owner
 
@@ -208,7 +208,7 @@ Mandatory.  A one line description of this distribution.  So, for instance:
 
 =head3 authors
 
-Optional.  A list of (mnemonic) names of people who work / have worked in this
+Optional.  A list of (mnemonic) names of people who work / have worked on this
 distribution.  For informational purposes only.  An example:
 
   "authors" : [
@@ -252,9 +252,9 @@ Archive::Zlib.
 
 An installer has the option to automatically install any dependencies, if the
 user has so indicated.  Dependencies and alternatives should be tried in the
-order they are specified.  In the case of alternatives, The first one
-for which the recommendation manager returns an identity, should be installed.
-Failure of installation an alternative, may allow automatic attempts on other
+order they are specified.  In the case of alternatives, the first one
+for which the recommendation manager returns an identity should be installed.
+Failure of installation of an alternative may allow automatic attempts on other
 alternatives.
 
 Please note that the C<use> strings of compilation units are specified.  It