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 <p>We are pleased to announce that the UtahJS JavaScript Conference, part of Silicon Slopes Summit, is requesting paper submissions for talks.
-This is going to be big. Think hundreds of people all in the same place to learn about JavaScript and HTML5!</p>
+This is going to be big. Think of hundreds of people, all in the same place, learning about JavaScript and HTML5!</p>
 <p>If you have a topic you would like to speak on at our conference, please do not hesitate to propose a talk.</p>
 
 <h2>Key dates</h2>