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Some minor editorial tweaks for s6.1. #321

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10 changes: 5 additions & 5 deletions draft-ietf-quic-transport.md
Expand Up @@ -644,10 +644,10 @@ When the server receives a packet from a client with the VERSION flag set, it
compares the client's version to the versions it supports.

If the version selected by the client is not acceptable to the server, the
server discards the incoming packet and responds with a version negotiation
server discards the incoming packet and responds with a Version Negotiation
packet ({{version-negotiation-packet}}). This includes the VERSION flag and a
list of versions that the server will accept. A server MUST send a version
negotiation packet for every packet that it receives with an unacceptable
list of versions that the server will accept. A server MUST send a Version
Negotiation packet for every packet that it receives with an unacceptable
version.

If the packet contains a version that is acceptable to the server, the server
Expand All @@ -666,10 +666,10 @@ set and MUST include the new negotiated protocol version.
The client MUST set the VERSION flag and include its selected version on all
packets until it has 1-RTT keys and it has received a packet from the server
that does not have the VERSION flag set. With TLS, this means that unprotected
packets and 0-RTT protected packets all include a version field.
packets and 0-RTT protected packets all include a VERSION flag.
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The earlier form was actually more accurate. There's a VERSION flag that indicates (i) the presence of a version field in packets from client to server, and (ii) the packet is a version negotiation packet when the packet is server -> client.


A client MUST NOT change the version it uses unless it is in response to a
version negotiation packet from the server. Once a client receives a packet
Version Negotiation packet from the server. Once a client receives a packet
from the server with the VERSION flag unset, it MUST ignore the flag in
subsequently received packets.

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