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Editorial suggestions on TLS #3818

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I believe these are all editorial, but please review.

@MikeBishop MikeBishop added editorial An issue that does not affect the design of the protocol; does not require consensus. -tls labels Jul 2, 2020
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Thanks for doing this Mike. It's telling how often I make the same mistakes. I'd say "at least I was consistent, but I don't think that I was :)

Just a few tweaks and we're good.

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@@ -1110,7 +1112,7 @@ sample.
To ensure that sufficient data is available for sampling, packets are padded so
that the combined lengths of the encoded packet number and protected payload is
at least 4 bytes longer than the sample required for header protection. The
ciphersuites defined in {{?TLS13}} - other than TLS_AES_128_CCM_8_SHA256, for
cipher suites defined in {{!TLS13}} - other than TLS_AES_128_CCM_8_SHA256, for
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I tend to use ? where the reference is normative.

If you follow this discipline and remove the last normative reference, the right thing happens. But I can't see that happening here, so this change is fine.

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MikeBishop and others added 2 commits July 7, 2020 18:10
Co-authored-by: Martin Thomson <mt@lowentropy.net>
Co-authored-by: Martin Thomson <mt@lowentropy.net>
@martinthomson martinthomson merged commit 5c626a3 into master Jul 14, 2020
@martinthomson martinthomson deleted the tls/mbishop_wglc branch July 14, 2020 07:17
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