-
Notifications
You must be signed in to change notification settings - Fork 204
New issue
Have a question about this project? Sign up for a free GitHub account to open an issue and contact its maintainers and the community.
By clicking “Sign up for GitHub”, you agree to our terms of service and privacy statement. We’ll occasionally send you account related emails.
Already on GitHub? Sign in to your account
Editorial suggestions on TLS #3818
Conversation
There was a problem hiding this comment.
Choose a reason for hiding this comment
The reason will be displayed to describe this comment to others. Learn more.
Thanks for doing this Mike. It's telling how often I make the same mistakes. I'd say "at least I was consistent, but I don't think that I was :)
Just a few tweaks and we're good.
@@ -1110,7 +1112,7 @@ sample. | |||
To ensure that sufficient data is available for sampling, packets are padded so | |||
that the combined lengths of the encoded packet number and protected payload is | |||
at least 4 bytes longer than the sample required for header protection. The | |||
ciphersuites defined in {{?TLS13}} - other than TLS_AES_128_CCM_8_SHA256, for | |||
cipher suites defined in {{!TLS13}} - other than TLS_AES_128_CCM_8_SHA256, for |
There was a problem hiding this comment.
Choose a reason for hiding this comment
The reason will be displayed to describe this comment to others. Learn more.
I tend to use ? where the reference is normative.
If you follow this discipline and remove the last normative reference, the right thing happens. But I can't see that happening here, so this change is fine.
Co-authored-by: Martin Thomson <mt@lowentropy.net>
Co-authored-by: Martin Thomson <mt@lowentropy.net>
000a681
to
39e6b42
Compare
I believe these are all editorial, but please review.