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Closing and draining tidy #3988

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Closing and draining tidy #3988

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Commits on Aug 6, 2020

  1. Closing and draining tidy

    I took a careful look at the text here and found a few things:
    
    1. There wasn't much redundancy, but there was a little.
    
    2. The closing and draining states only apply to immediate close.
    
    So I moved things up.  Shortened the top-level immediate close text, and
    moved text specific to closing or draining to the corresponding
    sections.
    
    There were a few bits that could be cut, and a few that needed to be
    better aligned with existing text, but nothing major.  Most of this is
    unmodified text.
    
    There are a few bits that I had to rewrite.  I will add comments for
    those.
    
    Closes #3907.
    martinthomson committed Aug 6, 2020
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  2. Remove self-reference

    martinthomson committed Aug 6, 2020
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  3. Move general stuff into introductory piece

    And a few grammar fixes
    martinthomson committed Aug 6, 2020
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  4. Better factoring of closing state introduction

    Also stop using 'closing period', which is confusing.
    martinthomson committed Aug 6, 2020
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Commits on Aug 11, 2020

  1. s/the//

    Co-authored-by: ianswett <ianswett@users.noreply.github.com>
    martinthomson and ianswett committed Aug 11, 2020
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  2. Ian's cleanup

    Co-authored-by: ianswett <ianswett@users.noreply.github.com>
    martinthomson and ianswett committed Aug 11, 2020
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Commits on Aug 12, 2020

  1. Small tweaks

    Co-authored-by: Mike Bishop <mbishop@evequefou.be>
    martinthomson and MikeBishop committed Aug 12, 2020
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  2. Rewrap

    martinthomson committed Aug 12, 2020
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Commits on Aug 27, 2020

  1. Many little nits

    Co-authored-by: Jana Iyengar <jri.ietf@gmail.com>
    martinthomson and janaiyengar committed Aug 27, 2020
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  2. Wrap

    martinthomson committed Aug 27, 2020
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