Murray Kucherawy has entered the following ballot position for

draft-ietf-roll-turnon-rfc8138-12: No Objection

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Hello Murray:

Many thanks for your time, review, and in-depth checking.

Let's see below:

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> COMMENT:
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> The glossary lists "OF" and "OCP", but those acronyms are not present in the
> document.

Removed the terms. Added subDAG instead to comply with Tiru's comment in a parallel thread.

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> I had to do some bouncing between documents while reading Section 3.  Figure
> 1 shows what appear to be five flags, not four, and says "T" is declared in
> "position 2", though in the diagram it looks like the third position.  If position
> numbering is zero-based, that should be made clear (it's not in RFC
> 6550 either).

Actually it is indicated in RFC 6550, though well hidden, see https://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc6550#section-20.14
See also https://www.iana.org/assignments/rpl/rpl.xhtml#dodag-config-option-flags

Again, many thanks for your thorough checks, and please let me know if you think I should change/clarify something there.

Take care,

Pascal

roll-turnon-rfc8138.txt

@@ -154,8 +154,7 @@ Internet-Draft                Turn On 6LoRH               September 2020
    DODAG:  Destination-Oriented Directed Acyclic Graph
    LLN:  Low-Power and Lossy Network
    RPL:  IPv6 Routing Protocol for Low-Power and Lossy Networks
-   OF:  RPL Objective Function
-   OCP:  RPL Objective Code Point
+   SubDAG:  Subset of a DAG that is a child of a node
    MOP:  RPL Mode of Operation
    RPI:  RPL Packet Information
    RAL:  RPL-Aware Leaf
@@ -165,6 +164,7 @@ Internet-Draft                Turn On 6LoRH               September 2020
 
 
 
+
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 Internet-Draft                Turn On 6LoRH               September 2020
@@ -396,10 +396,10 @@ Internet-Draft                Turn On 6LoRH               September 2020
 
 8.  Acknowledgments
 
-   The authors wish to thank Meral Shirazipour, Barry Leiba, Nagendra
-   Kumar Nainar, Stewart Bryant, Carles Gomez, Alvaro Retana, Dominique
-   Barthel and Rahul Jadhav for their in-depth reviews and constructive
-   suggestions.
+   The authors wish to thank Murray Kucherawy, Meral Shirazipour, Barry
+   Leiba, Tirumaleswar Reddy, Nagendra Kumar Nainar, Stewart Bryant,
+   Carles Gomez, and especially Alvaro Retana, Dominique Barthel and
+   Rahul Jadhav for their in-depth reviews and constructive suggestions.
 
    Also many thanks to Michael Richardson for being always helpful and
    responsive when need comes.

roll-turnon-rfc8138.xml

@@ -158,8 +158,7 @@
     <dt>DODAG:</dt><dd> Destination-Oriented Directed Acyclic Graph </dd>
     <dt>LLN:</dt><dd> Low-Power and Lossy Network </dd>
     <dt>RPL:</dt><dd> IPv6 Routing Protocol for Low-Power and Lossy Networks </dd>
-    <dt>OF:</dt><dd> RPL Objective Function</dd>
-    <dt>OCP:</dt><dd> RPL Objective Code Point</dd>
+    <dt>SubDAG:</dt><dd> Subset of a DAG that is a child of a node </dd>
     <dt>MOP:</dt><dd> RPL Mode of Operation </dd>
     <dt>RPI:</dt><dd> RPL Packet Information </dd>
     <dt>RAL:</dt><dd> RPL-Aware Leaf </dd>
@@ -466,10 +465,11 @@
 
    <section><name>Acknowledgments</name>
    <t>
-   The authors wish to thank Meral Shirazipour, Barry Leiba,
-   Nagendra Kumar Nainar, Stewart Bryant, Carles Gomez, Alvaro Retana,
-   Dominique Barthel and Rahul Jadhav for their in-depth reviews and
-   constructive suggestions.
+   The authors wish to thank
+   Murray Kucherawy, Meral Shirazipour, Barry Leiba, Tirumaleswar Reddy,
+   Nagendra Kumar Nainar, Stewart Bryant, Carles Gomez,
+   and especially Alvaro Retana, Dominique Barthel and Rahul Jadhav for their
+   in-depth reviews and constructive suggestions.
    </t><t>
    Also many thanks to Michael Richardson for being always helpful and responsive
    when need comes.