Merge pull request #8 from sunpy/review

Changes to address review from editors

main.tex

@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
 \usepackage[onehalfspacing]{setspace}
 \usepackage{xspace}
 \usepackage{csquotes}
-\usepackage[final,addedmarkup=uuline]{changes}
+\usepackage[draft,addedmarkup=uuline]{changes}
 
 %\linenumbers
 
@@ -20,6 +20,8 @@
 \newcommand{\astropy}{Astropy\xspace}
 \newcommand{\astropypkg}{\package{astropy}}
 \newcommand{\aiapypkg}{\package{aiapy}}
+\newcommand{\pfsspypkg}{\package{pfsspy}}
+\newcommand{\soarpkg}{\package{sunpy\_soar}}
 \newcommand{\numpy}{NumPy\xspace}
 \newcommand{\numpypkg}{\package{numpy}}
 \newcommand{\matplotlib}{matplotlib\xspace}
@@ -98,7 +100,7 @@ \section*{Conflict of Interest Statement}
 \section*{Author Contributions}
 \label{sec:author-contributions}
 
-W.T.B. contributed to writing the text and created \autoref{fig:sunpy-core-summary} and \autoref{fig:affiliated-package-showcase}.
+W.T.B. contributed to writing the text and created \autoref{fig:affiliated-package-showcase}.
 S.C., N.F., L.A.H, and D.S. contributed to writing the text.
 All authors contributed to manuscript planning and revision and have read and approved the submitted version.
 
@@ -135,6 +137,6 @@ \section*{Acknowledgments}
 \bibliography{references}
 
 % This is for tracking changes
-%\listofchanges
+\listofchanges
 
 \end{document}

references.bib

@@ -47,7 +47,7 @@ @online{guo2014
   url          = {https://cacm.acm.org/blogs/blog-cacm/176450},
   urldate      = {2019-08-01}
 }
-@article{refId0,
+@article{pence_definition_2010,
   title        = {Definition of the Flexible Image Transport System (FITS),   version 3.0},
   author       = {{Pence}, W. D. and {Chiappetti}, L. and {Page}, C. G. and {Shaw}, R. A. and {Stobie}, E.},
   year         = 2010,
@@ -632,3 +632,14 @@ @manual{christe_steven_2018_3261663
   doi          = {10.5281/zenodo.3261663},
   url          = {https://doi.org/10.5281/zenodo.3261663}
 }
+
+@article{wells_fits_1981,
+  title = {{{FITS}} - a {{Flexible Image Transport System}}},
+  author = {Wells, D. C. and Greisen, E. W. and Harten, R. H.},
+  year = {1981},
+  month = jun,
+  journal = {Astronomy and Astrophysics Supplement Series},
+  volume = {44},
+  pages = {363},
+  issn = {0365-0138}
+}

sections/1-introduction.tex

@@ -2,11 +2,11 @@ \section{Introduction}
 \label{sec:introduction}
 
 The \sunpyproj is an organization whose mission is to develop and facilitate a high-quality, easy-to-use, community-led, free and open-source solar data analysis ecosystem based on the scientific Python environment.
-The vision of the project is to build a diverse and inclusive solar physics and heliophysics community that supports scientific discovery and \added[id=WTB]{enables} reproducibility through the development of accessible, open-source software \citep{bobra_monica_2020_7020094}.
+The vision of the project is to build a diverse and inclusive solar physics and heliophysics community that supports scientific discovery and enables reproducibility through the development of accessible, open-source software \citep{bobra_monica_2020_7020094}.
 To achieve this mission and to make this vision a reality, the \sunpyproj maintains and guides the development of a number of Python packages including the \sunpypkg core package, and organizes educational activities around the use of Python for solar-physics research.
 
 As the scientific Python environment matured in the early 2010s \citep{Hunter:2007, harris2020array, 2020SciPy-NMeth}, the development of a Python package devoted to solar physics became viable.
-This led to the founding of the \sunpyproj led by scientists at NASA Goddard Space Flight Center in \added[id=WTB]{2011}.
+This led to the founding of the \sunpyproj in 2011 by scientists at NASA Goddard Space Flight Center.
 The goal of the \sunpyproj at that time was to develop a package that provided the core functionality needed for solar data analysis in Python.
 To distinguish the software package from the wider project, this original package is now known as the \sunpypkg core package \citep{sunpy_community2020}.
 As the \sunpyproj and \sunpypkg grew, an ecosystem of affiliated packages (see \autoref{ssec:affiliated-packages}) was developed to keep the \sunpypkg core package from becoming too large and difficult to manage.