Fix tense and sentence length

[aalaap]

Changed past-perfect and present mixture to use just the present tense and added a comma.

Before:

If the user had submitted an invalid username or password, this controller reads the form submission error from the security system so that it can be displayed back to the user.

After:

If the user submits an invalid username or password, this controller reads the form submission error from the security system so, that it can be displayed back to the user.

[javiereguiluz]

👍

Status: reviewed

[weaverryan]

Ah, so much better. Thanks so much Aalaap!

[aalaap]

Anything for my favorite framework!

On Aug 2, 2016 6:21 AM, "Ryan Weaver" notifications@github.com wrote:

Ah, so much better. Thanks so much Aalaap!

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