systemctl: update page; systemd-analyze: add page #844
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| `systemctl --failed` | |||
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| - Start/Stop/Restart a service: | |||
| - Start/Stop/Restart/Reloadconfiguration a service: | |||
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"Reloadconfiguration a service" is not valid English. Can't we reword this?
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| # systemd-analyze | |||
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| > Show timing details about the boot process. | |||
| > Show timing details about the boot process(services, mount points, devices, sockets). | |||
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I'd suggest actually using the word that is going to be used in the tokens, e.g. "unit". Also, this needs a space before the parenthesis :)
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