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@@ -68,7 +68,7 @@ <h1>cyclone.io</h1>
       <hr>
 
       <p><a href="https://github.com/fiorix/cyclone">Cyclone</a> is a web server framework
-      for Python, that implements the Tornado API as a Twisted protocol.</p>
+      for Python that implements the Tornado API as a Twisted protocol.</p>
 
       <p><a href="http://twistedmatrix.com">Twisted</a> is an event-driven network programming
       framework for Python, that dates back from 2002. It&#8217;s one of the most mature
@@ -77,21 +77,20 @@ <h1>cyclone.io</h1>
       web server, one of the most popular and fast web servers for Python, with
       a very decent API for building web applications.</p>
 
-      <p>The idea is that applications built with Cyclone look like Tornado, which is
-      a very nice and straightforward way of structuring web applications, but
-      on the other hand leverage all protocols supported by twisted.</p>
+      <p>The idea is to bridge Tornado's elegant and straightforward API to Twisted's
+      Event-Loop, enabling a vast number of supported protocols.</p>
 
-      <p>This combination provides the ground for building up hybrid servers that not
-      only can handle http clients very efficiently, but also serve or use e-mail,
+      <p>This combination provides the ground for building up hybrid servers capable
+      of handling HTTP very efficiently while also serve or use e-mail,
       ssh, sip, irc, etc, all concurrently.</p>
 
-      <p>Besides the rich feature set, there&#8217;s also an effort for addressing the C10K
+      <p>On top of this rich feature set, Cyclone also addresses the C10K
       problem. For more information check <a class="reference external" href="http://www.kegel.com/c10k.html">http://www.kegel.com/c10k.html</a>.</p>
 
       <h3>Installation</h3>
       <p>Cyclone is listed in <a href="http://pypi.python.org/pypi/cyclone">PyPI</a> and can be installed
       with <i>pip</i> or <i>easy_install</i>. Note that the source distribution includes demo applications
-      that are not present when Cyclone is installed in this way, so you may with to download
+      that are not present when Cyclone is installed via packages, so you may want to download
       a copy of the source tarball as well.</p>
 
       <p>Download the latest version from <a href="http://pypi.python.org/pypi/cyclone">http://pypi.python.org/pypi/cyclone</a>
@@ -108,15 +107,15 @@ <h3>Prerequisites</h3>
         <li>pyOpenSSL: <a href="https://launchpad.net/pyopenssl">https://launchpad.net/pyopenssl</a> (only if you want SSL/TLS)</li>
       </ul>
 
-      <p>On Python 2.5, simplejson is required too.</p>
+      <p><span class="label label-info">Heads up!</span> On Python 2.5, simplejson is required too.</p>
 
       <h3>Demos</h3>
       <p>Get up to speed with our comprehensive demo applications:</p>
       <ul>
-        <li>Tornado or Bottle application styles:
+        <li>Tornado / Bottle application style:
       <a href="https://github.com/fiorix/cyclone/tree/master/demos/helloworld">helloworld.py</a></li>
 
-        <li>Make your software translatable. See the <a href="https://github.com/fiorix/cyclone/tree/master/demos/locale">locale demo</a>,
+        <li>Localization ? See the <a href="https://github.com/fiorix/cyclone/tree/master/demos/locale">locale demo</a>,
       amigo.</li>
 
         <li>E-mails with attachments: <a href="https://github.com/fiorix/cyclone/tree/master/demos/email">email demo</a></li>
@@ -135,7 +134,7 @@ <h3>Demos</h3>
 
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+      <p>Contribute with code, pizza, gifts or donations.</p>
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