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Some wording changes, some punctuation, and line length updates.
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| designed to enable the controller of a <a>DID</a> to prove control over | ||
| it and to be implemented independently of any centralized registry, identity | ||
| provider, or certificate authority. <a>DIDs</a> are URLs that relate a | ||
| <a>DID subject</a> allowing trustable interactions with that subject by way of a |
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It now doesn't say what the DID subject is related to. Maybe
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| <a>DID subject</a> allowing trustable interactions with that subject by way of a | |
| <a>DID subject</a> to a DID document, allowing trustable interactions with that subject. |
| <a>DIDs</a>. This creates an interoperability bridge between the worlds of | ||
| centralized, federated, and <a>decentralized identifiers</a>. | ||
| </p> | ||
| <p class="note"> |
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