Bug it -> of ; reword ???

w3c · Jan 7, 2015 · 1fc6254 · 1fc6254
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@@ -1533,9 +1533,8 @@ <h2>The model: sources, sinks, constraints, and settings</h2>
       transmission constant to the remote client.</p>
 
       <p>While not shown, an equally valid settings change request could be
-      made of the remote client video source (the peer connection on the remote
-      client's side). This would not only impact sink Y and Z in the same
-      manner as before, but could lead to re-negotiation with the peer
+      client's side). In addition to impacting sink Y and Z in the same
+      manner as A, B and C were impacted earlier, it could lead to re-negotiation with the peer
       connection on the home client in order to alter the transformation that
       it is applying to the home client's video source. Such a change is NOT
       REQUIRED to change anything related to sink A or B or the home client's