Tweak copy

wfarr · May 6, 2012 · 7efe443 · 7efe443
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commit 7efe443
Showing 1 changed file with 3 additions and 3 deletions.
diff --git a/app/frontend/public/403.html b/app/frontend/public/403.html
@@ -17,16 +17,16 @@
 
   <script type="text/javascript" src="/js/application.js"></script>
 
-  <title>Play: 403 Unauthorized. You are not on the list.</title>
+  <title>Play - Unauthorized</title>
 
 </head>
 <body class="error-403">
 
 <div style="Background: #fff; border-radius: 0.5em; margin: 1em; padding: 1em;">
 
 <section class="notice">
-  <h1>clUb 403</h1>
-  <h2>Sorry, you are not on the authorized list. Ask nicely and I might <a href="/" title="play">recheck the list</a>.</h2>
+  <h1>Denied</h1>
+  <h2>Sorry; you're not part of the club.</h2>
 </section>
 
 <img src="images/octobouncer.png" alt="octobouncer" width=448 height=448 />