[e] (0) Oops, the grammar made no sense here. Fixed.

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    <h1 id=html-5>HTML 5</h1>
 
-   <h2 class="no-num no-toc" id=working>Working Draft &mdash; 12 June 2007</h2>
+   <h2 class="no-num no-toc" id=working>Working Draft &mdash; 13 June 2007</h2>
 
    <p>You can take part in this work. <a
     href="http://www.whatwg.org/mailing-list">Join the working group's
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     historically been validators. The resulting confusion &mdash; with
     validators claiming documents to have one representation while widely
     deployed Web browsers interoperably implemented a different
-    representation &mdash; has resulted in this version of HTML returning to
-    a non-SGML basis.</p>
+    representation &mdash; has wasted decades of productivity. This version
+    of HTML thus returns to a non-SGML basis.</p>
 
    <p>Authors interested in using SGML tools in their authoring pipeline are
     encouraged to use XML tools and the XML serialisation of HTML5.</p>

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@@ -30384,8 +30384,9 @@ function receiver(e) {
    application have historically been validators. The resulting
    confusion &mdash; with validators claiming documents to have one
    representation while widely deployed Web browsers interoperably
-   implemented a different representation &mdash; has resulted in this
-   version of HTML returning to a non-SGML basis.</p>
+   implemented a different representation &mdash; has wasted decades
+   of productivity. This version of HTML thus returns to a non-SGML
+   basis.</p>
 
    <p>Authors interested in using SGML tools in their authoring
    pipeline are encouraged to use XML tools and the XML serialisation