Update timeline.xml

winnifredeatonarchive · Feb 2, 2024 · 719a968 · 719a968
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diff --git a/data/info/timeline.xml b/data/info/timeline.xml
@@ -44,6 +44,7 @@
             </textClass>
         </profileDesc>
         <revisionDesc status="published">
+            <change who="pers:LW1" when="2024-02-01" status="published">Corrected typos.</change>
             <change who="pers:LW1" when="2024-02-01" status="published">added graphic and desc of Diana, the granddaughter of Winnifred. Corrected typos.</change>
             <change who="pers:LW1" when="2024-02-01" status="published">added info and corrected
                 errors</change>
@@ -152,7 +153,7 @@
 
                     <event when="1863">
                         <p>Edward Eaton and Achuen Amoy marry more formally at Shanghai’s Trinity
-                            Church, after being married on board ship.</p>
+                            Church, after being married onboard ship.</p>
                     </event>
 
                     <event when="1864">
@@ -202,7 +203,7 @@
                     </event>
 
                     <event when="1869">
-                        <p>Winnifred’ brother Ernest George born.</p>
+                        <p>Winnifred’s brother Ernest George born.</p>
                     </event>
 
                     <event when="1871">
@@ -941,7 +942,7 @@
                     <event when="1945">
                         <ab type="graphic">
                             <graphic url="media:Diana_granddaughter.jpg">
-                                <desc>Winnifred’s only granddaughter, Diana, in 2014.</desc>
+                                <desc>Winnifred’s only granddaughter, Diana.</desc>
                             </graphic>
                         </ab>
                         <p>Winnifred’s only granddaughter, Diana (pictured above), born to Charley and Helen in