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<view>Ren considers this, screwing up his eyes thoughtfully.</view>
<sp>
<speaker>REN</speaker>
<p>Mebbe <note>Maybe</note> you’re right.</p>
<p>Mebbe you’re right.</p>
</sp>
<pb n="B-12"/>
<fw type="pageNum">B-12</fw>
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<p> Colonel -- it’s a corpse! </p>
</sp>
<view>Bull, who had kept in the background, gives the wink to one of his men. The
latter is a skinny, foxy little one-eyed man named Lefty. Left [[sic Lefty]]
slips over and pulls the burlap from the sprawled over figure, revealing Thad,
lying face downward, his head dangling over one side of the horse, his legs on
the other. There are screams from some of the women.</view>
latter is a skinny, foxy little one-eyed man named Lefty. <choice>
<sic>Left</sic>
<corr>Lefty</corr>
</choice> slips over and pulls the burlap from the sprawled over figure,
revealing Thad, lying face downward, his head dangling over one side of the
horse, his legs on the other. There are screams from some of the women.</view>
<sp>
<speaker>REN</speaker>
<p> It’s just my pardner. </p>
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<view> They are now at <choice>
<sic>Diggins</sic>
<corr>Diggins’s</corr>
</choice> wagon. Diggons is proudly opening the flap and has crawled into the
wagon but Ren does not follow him. Ren has made the delightful discovery that
the next wagon to Diggons is none other than the Appleton wagon, on the steps
of which sits Sally Lou. </view>
</choice> wagon. <choice>
<sic>Diggons</sic>
<corr>Diggins</corr>
</choice> is proudly opening the flap and has crawled into the wagon but Ren
does not follow him. Ren has made the delightful discovery that the next wagon
to Diggins is none other than the Appleton wagon, on the steps of which sits
Sally Lou. </view>
<view>Ren stands perfectly still, smiling at Sally. Sally, forgetting herself,
starts to return the smile and then her face becomes very cool as she tosses
her head and looks over the head of Ren as if he were not there at all. </view>
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<sp>
<speaker>REN</speaker>
<p> There’s a powerful fine girl in that first wagon and she’s pretty as a
daisy, an’ she’s different from other gels <note>girls</note> -- </p>
daisy, an’ she’s different from other gels<note type="editorial"
>girls</note> -- </p>
</sp>
<sp>
<speaker>THAD</speaker>
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</sp>
<sp>
<speaker>REN</speaker>
<p> Not me. That was my ornery pardner. You see I reckoned that mebbe
<note>maybe</note> you all would be needin’ real guides. </p>
<p> Not me. That was my ornery pardner. You see I reckoned that mebbe you all
would be needin’ real guides. </p>
</sp>
<sp>
<speaker>SALLY</speaker>
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<sp>
<speaker>REN</speaker>
<p> I’m travelin’ over the Mount Hood route, and I come down thinkin’ mebbe
<note>maybe</note> you’d be needin’ help -- </p>
you’d be needin’ help -- </p>
</sp>
<sp>
<speaker>APPLETON</speaker>
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</sp>
<sp>
<speaker>SALLY</speaker>
<p>Well, I want you to <choice>
<sic>ketch</sic>
<corr>catch</corr>
</choice> up with him. Run your hardest Mose - and I want you to take this
chicken to him and you can mention the fact that it’s sent with the
compliments of Col. Appleton’s wagon.</p>
<p>Well, I want you to ketch<note type="editorial">catch</note> up with him.
Run your hardest Mose - and I want you to take this chicken to him and you
can mention the fact that it’s sent with the compliments of Col. Appleton’s
wagon.</p>
</sp>
<view>The more Mose looks at the chicken the wider awake he becomes. He takes the
napkin with its precious contents from Miss Sally, jumps down from the wagon
and is off.</view>
<view>We show Mose. ahead of him, loping slowly and disconsolately along is Ren.
<view>We show Mose. Ahead of him, loping slowly and disconsolately along is Ren.
Mose’s nostrils dilate. He slackens his pace. Mose lifts the chicken to his
nose - sniffs. He begins to go <choice>
<sic>shower and shower</sic>
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type="pageNum">H-3.</fw> come from either side of the trail. They are met
with a fusilade of shots.</view>
<stage type="novelistic">The Indians failing to charge the train, on account of
its position, have been examining <note type="editorial" resp="pers:LW1">The
its position, have been examining<note type="editorial" resp="pers:LW1">The
typo <q>examin</q> has been corrected in the original text.</note> the top
of the boulder lined canyon walls. They discover that it is possible to uproot
some of the stupendous boulders and roll them down upon the train
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</sp>
<view>They kiss. Thad jumps down from steps of wagon and runs out of scene. Sally
turns and goes into wagon.</view>
<view>Ren, who has witnessed the scene between Sally and his pardner
<note>partner</note>, stands for a moment as if rooted to the spot. His
world seems to be tumbling about him; his dreams shattered his illusions
destroyed. He makes a passionate, almost savage motion toward the wagon. <choice>
<view>Ren, who has witnessed the scene between Sally and his pardner,<note
type="editorial">partner</note> stands for a moment as if rooted to the
spot. His world seems to be tumbling about him; his dreams shattered his
illusions destroyed. He makes a passionate, almost savage motion toward the
wagon. <choice>
<sic>They</sic>
<corr>Then</corr>
</choice> he stops short. His <pb n="I-7"/><fw type="pageNum">I-7</fw> hands
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</sp>
<sp>
<speaker>REN</speaker>
<p>How do you figger <note>figure</note> that out?</p>
<p>How do you figger <note type="editorial">figure</note> that out?</p>
</sp>
<sp>
<speaker>THAD</speaker>
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