PDF after seminar on 4.4

translation/chapters/translation 4-04.tex

@@ -111,19 +111,19 @@ \section{Translation}
 
     \item[10cd--11] 
 
-When the wind has reached the whole body, an intelligent person should 
-conquer
-it by means of immersion, \se{kuṭī}{sauna}, \se{karṣū}{trench sweating},
-\se{prastara}{blanket sweating}, oil massage, enema, and
-blood-letting.\footnote{These forms of sweating treatment are described in the
-    \CS\ (\Ca{1.14.39--63}{90--92}). %
-    Regarding blood-letting, \Dalhana{4.4.11}{421} commented  there that 
-    because
-    the verse has the plural form \dev{sirāmokṣaiḥ}, five blood vessels have to
-    be drained of blood if the wind is not pacified by oil massage, etc.} Or, if
-    is located in a single limb and is stuck there, a thoughtful physician may
-    conquer it with cow-horns.\footnote{\dev{śṛṅga} “cow-horns” refers to
-        bloodletting by horn; see the description at \SS\ \Su{1.13.5}{55}.}
+When the wind has reached the whole body, an intelligent person should
+conquer it by means of immersion, \se{kuṭī}{sauna}, \se{karṣū}{trench
+    sweating}, \se{prastara}{blanket sweating}, oil massage, enema, and
+blood-letting.\footnote{These forms of sweating treatment are
+    described in the \CS\ (\Ca{1.14.39--63}{90--92}).
+
+Regarding blood-letting, \Dalhana{4.4.11}{421} commented  that because
+the verse has the plural form \dev{sirāmokṣaiḥ}, five blood vessels
+have to be drained of blood if the wind is not pacified by oil
+massage, etc.} Or, if is located in a single limb and is stuck there,
+a thoughtful physician may conquer it with
+cow-horns.\footnote{\dev{śṛṅga} “cow-horns” refers to bloodletting by
+    horn; see the description at \SS\ \Su{1.13.5}{55}.}
 
 
 
@@ -144,19 +144,23 @@ \section{Translation}
 a fruit.\footnote{The vulgate reading \dev{dihyāt} for the Nepalese 
 \dev{lihyāt} changes the meaning to “one should smear.”
 
-    \Dalhana{4.4.13}{421} glossed \dls{pañcamūlī} as optionally the first  or 
+    \Dalhana{4.4.13}{421} glossed \dev{pañcamūlī} as optionally the first  or 
     the second five roots.  On this therapy, cf.\ Cakrapāṇi's commentary on 
     \Ca{1.5.3}{36} for a similar therapy.
 
     The “juice” (\dev{rasa}) is glossed by Ḍalhaṇa as specifically being a 
     \se{māṃsarasa}{meat broth}.   The sourness he said may come from fruits 
     such as pomegranate. 
 
-    \cite[70]{moni-sans} says that \dev{rasāmla} may mean a vinegar made 
-    from fruit, so the expression \dev{phalāmlo rasaḥ} in the text here may 
-    mean a vinegar made from sour fruit. Cf.\ \dev{dhānyāmla}.}
-    
+  \dev{rasāmla} may mean a vinegar made from fruit  
+\citep[70]{moni-sans}, so the expression \dev{phalāmlo rasaḥ} in the
+text here may mean a vinegar made from sour fruit. Cf.\
+\dev{dhānyāmla}.}
 
+     \bigskip       
+    \begin{tt}
+        \marginpar{Draft tr.\ from here}
+
     \item[14--15]
 
    %  got to here 2024-05-08
@@ -174,16 +178,14 @@ \section{Translation}
         known as \textit{Sālvala}.\footnote{Cf.\ \dev{sālvaṇa} “sweat from
             a poultice” in \cite[898]{josi-maha}.              
             Murty {1.26.3}{v.\,1, 448} describes a poultice called “sālvala” made 
-            with numerous ingredients.\q{fix As ref.}
+            with numerous ingredients.}\q{fix As ref.}
 
     \item[16ab]
     For patients with diseases of the wind, one should always apply this 
     (\textit{sālvala}) as a poultice.
 
 
-    \bigskip       
-    \begin{tt}
-        \marginpar{Draft tr.\ from here}
+
     \item[16cd-18ab]
      Whether a body part has become contracted or bent, is troubled by a 
      [wind] disease, or has become numb, one should tightly bind it with a long 
@@ -343,10 +345,11 @@ \section{Translation}
     The admixture added to it consists of \gls{pippalī}, etc. This (resultant) is 
     the salt called \textit{kalyāṇaka} that is mentioned in wind disorders and in 
     meals and drinks for the patients troubled by \textit{plīhāgnisaṃga}, 
-    indigestion, loss of appetite, and piles.\\ 
+    indigestion, loss of appetite, and piles.
 
 
     Thus ends the fourth chapter on the treatment of wind diseases. 
 
 \end{tt}    
+
 \end{translation}

translation/incremental_SS_Translation.tex

@@ -8,30 +8,30 @@
 \addbibresource{incremental_SS_Translation.bib}
 
 \includeonly{
-%    chapters/introduction,
-%    chapters/translation 1-01, 
-%    chapters/translation 1-02, % nothing there yet
-%    chapters/translation 1-03, % nothing there yet
-%    chapters/translation 1-13, % leeches (Lisa Brooks)
-%    chapters/translation 1-14, % Blood (Paras Mehta)
-%    chapters/translation 1-16, % ear, nose surgery
-%    chapters/translation 1-28, % nothing there yet
-%    chapters/translation 2-01, % wind diseases Harshal
-%    chapters/translation 3-02, % śukraśonita
-%    chapters/translation 3-03, % garbhāvakrānti  FIRST DRAFT 
+    chapters/introduction,
+    chapters/translation 1-01, 
+    chapters/translation 1-02, % nothing there yet
+    chapters/translation 1-03, % nothing there yet
+    chapters/translation 1-13, % leeches (Lisa Brooks)
+    chapters/translation 1-14, % Blood (Paras Mehta)
+    chapters/translation 1-16, % ear, nose surgery
+    chapters/translation 1-28, % nothing there yet
+    chapters/translation 2-01, % wind diseases Harshal
+    chapters/translation 3-02, % śukraśonita
+    chapters/translation 3-03, % garbhāvakrānti  FIRST DRAFT 
     chapters/translation 4-04, % vāta complete Paras
-%    chapters/translation 4-05, % vāta Paras
-%    chapters/translation 4-15, % mūḍhagarbha Vandana
-%    chapters/translation 5-01, % veg poisons
-%    chapters/translation 5-02, % veg poisons
-%    chapters/translation 5-03,  % poisonous insects and animals
-%    chapters/translation 5-04, % snakes and snakebite
-% chapters/translation 5-05, % treating snakebite
-%    chapters/translation 5-06, % dundubhi
-%    chapters/translation 6-17,
-%    chapters/translation 6-38,
-%%%%   chapters/translation 6-39, % jvara   Madhu - do not share yet
-%    chapters/translation 6-65, % tantrayukti, complete
+    chapters/translation 4-05, % vāta Paras
+    chapters/translation 4-15, % mūḍhagarbha Vandana
+    chapters/translation 5-01, % veg poisons
+    chapters/translation 5-02, % veg poisons
+    chapters/translation 5-03,  % poisonous insects and animals
+    chapters/translation 5-04, % snakes and snakebite
+ chapters/translation 5-05, % treating snakebite
+    chapters/translation 5-06, % dundubhi
+    chapters/translation 6-17,
+    chapters/translation 6-38,
+%%%   chapters/translation 6-39, % jvara   Madhu - do not share yet
+    chapters/translation 6-65, % tantrayukti, complete
   chapters/bibliography and indexes,
 %
    }